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Reviewer: Hawk29 Signed Date: 2014.01.18 - 05:36PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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Reading this story for... the third time now. You did the confrontation between Harry's friends and the Dursleys better than any other author I've seen. It's incredibly satisfying to read Ron and Hermione going off on the Dursleys. Great job keeping all the characterization perfect, that can be tough but you've done it better than I think JKR would have.

I'm looking forward to getting further into the story.



Reviewer: mrsmeggiepotter Signed Date: 2007.10.28 - 04:45PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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Reviewer: crazyredhead Signed Date: 2007.07.17 - 01:37PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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yay hermione and ron



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.04.20 - 09:19PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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Well go RON AND HERMIONE! yaaaaa those dursely's needed a good tounge lashing!



Reviewer: UnorthodoxConvention Signed Date: 2006.10.04 - 02:43AM Title: When One Door Closes...

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Great langauge. I like the way Ron and Hermione stand up for Harry. And Harry's cool transfigured bedroom. At least he has something nice at Privet Drive for once!! :) Glad to see in your A/N that Ginny'll be making an appearance. Terrific job, now I'm going to read the rest of your story. :)



Reviewer: snapitsmariel Anonymous Date: 2006.08.09 - 03:04PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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oh my god.

you're the first author i've found who's ever included this in their story. i've been thinking how riduculous those post-HBP stories are being when it comes to harry realizeing he does love ginny.

that thought, being if his greatest power is love, why is he pushing it away

thank you for keeping me sane

Author's Response: Giggle! I hope I don\'t revert you back to INsane by the time its over then, lol. Thanks much, I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it.

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Reviewer: amblewat Signed Date: 2006.07.03 - 09:46PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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nice job.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: wolfsgurl Signed Date: 2006.06.23 - 11:09AM Title: When One Door Closes...

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Reviewer: SueP Signed Date: 2006.05.18 - 11:26AM Title: When One Door Closes...

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What I really like about these first two chapters is the brilliant way you've captured the relationships between Harry Ron & Hermione. Ron is funny and unswerving loyal. Hermione is brilliant yet deluded. I loved how Harry was amused by Hermione's anger and hex, as opposed to irritated or angry.

The only thing that bothers me (and it bothered me in HBP alot) is that there never seems to be a consequence for Hermione's actions. She goes off on her riduculous quests or self-motivated delusions, she acts in a way everyone has told her isn't going to be productive, she gets the natural result, reacts just like Harry or Ron would have (or worse), and there is no consequence to her reaction. If Harry or Ron had used levicorpus on Vernon she'd be off her rocker at them. Because SHE used it, the guys laugh it off, she acts like she was justified, and they all go on to the next thing. I'm not really complaining to you about your story because your handling of it was VERY CANNON. As a writer I'm asking why you think she is continuously dealt a double standard because it eludes and frustrates me no end. Sorry, rant over.



Reviewer: Cassie Payne Signed Date: 2006.05.14 - 10:21PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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The birthday cake was so sad. I'm waiting patiently for Ginny, I know she will show up eventually. He thinks about her too much not to.

"I had to look into her eyes and see his face." And I loved this line. I really think this will be part of Snape's problem in book 7. Terrific job!

Author's Response: You won\'t have to wait long. Ginny appears in the next chaper.



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.05.01 - 02:58AM Title: When One Door Closes...

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I see you and I think a bit alike. Itís funny that I remarked in my last review about the possibility of Dudley abusing his power as a wizard and then the very idea occurred to him. Iím glad he seemed to change his mind about the advantages of learning spells. I adore Ron! Watching him stand up to Dudley and then Vernon was a pure pleasure. The birthday cake on the wall broke my heart. Great job!



Reviewer: Firebolt2006 Signed Date: 2006.04.14 - 06:16PM Title: When One Door Closes...

I love this. Rons comments and Hermione's reaction at the end was great. Never knew she had it in her.



Reviewer: Firebolt2006 Signed Date: 2006.04.14 - 06:16PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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I love this. Rons comments and Hermione's reaction at the end was great. Never knew she had it in her.



Reviewer: egyhos Anonymous Date: 2006.03.23 - 08:52PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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The locket, the cup, the snake, and something of (hufflepuff or Ravenclaw ) not(gryffindor or ravenclaw)

Author's Response: Hi. Uhm, no,l actually it is Ravenclaw or Gryffindor. The cup is from Hufflepuff and the locket is from Slytherin.

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Reviewer: MythWeaver Signed Date: 2006.03.23 - 05:38PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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This chapter may just be my favorite from ANY of your work. It really pulls the story back full circle- seeing Harry in the cupboard, little knowing that he did, after all, count for something in the world. There's something so very hopeful about this chapter.



Reviewer: rejeimha Anonymous Date: 2006.03.17 - 09:40AM Title: When One Door Closes...

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Another great chapter. Harry's internal struggle is coming to a nice head here, for even things that wouldn't remind her brothers or parents of her is reminding Harry o Ginny. May the resolve continue to weaken, and may our hero allow himself to return to the source of his power.

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Reviewer: Merlani Signed Date: 2006.03.11 - 10:24AM Title: When One Door Closes...

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I enjoyed Ron's lecture. Hermione was cool too.



Reviewer: v_t Signed Date: 2006.03.11 - 02:02AM Title: When One Door Closes...

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anxious to see what is going to come next. funny how I think on it now after reading your story but I don't ever recall Harry telling anyone about living under the cupboard. I really liked that scene.



Reviewer: Firebolt2006 Anonymous Date: 2006.03.09 - 10:07PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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I love it. Now if they just leave early in the morning without doing anything to Dudley as a pay back. Or a spell that would make Dudleys pigtail come back everytime he did any magic. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! Leaving early in the morning is just what they have in mind...

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Reviewer: Emmeline Vance Anonymous Date: 2006.03.08 - 07:10PM Title: When One Door Closes...

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This was a wonderful chapter! Ron and Hermione's standing up for Harry was so great, they really are such loyal friends. And I especially liked Ron's fast food flap--the "have a nice day" was brilliant. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: I do love the bond with the trio - I think sometimes we shippers tend to forget how great that bond is, so I like to give Ron and Hermione their moments.

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