Reviewer: Aragorn Signed Date: 2018.06.15 - 02:38PM Title: One Step Ahead
Have read this chapter a few times over the years...it is so brilliant in various ways.
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.08.04 - 05:56PM Title: One Step Ahead
Weddings can be such emotional roller coasters. It's so easy to upset someone's feelings, but at the same time when it's your day you should have it the way YOU want it, not just because it might be traditional or usual or the way "we do it"
Reviewer: lucky_black_cat Signed Date: 2006.09.25 - 08:28AM Title: One Step Ahead
That first scene will all the boys arguing made me giggle - I can just picture them, and I understand why Ginny didn't want her dad to "hand her over". Though I do wonder if, had someone else (like Luna) been there instead of Hermione, she would still have left all her brothers empty-handed. I've always thought Hermione is probably Ginny's best friend, so I think it's pretty sweet that she was the one to walk with Ginny. Bill's speech was lovely, and I would have loved to see "Harry" sitting there in the chair LOL! Like Ginny said, it was only about her, but at least her "groom" sitting at the table didn't complain too much LOL! Thanks for another wonderful chapter :) -Sonia
Reviewer: critmo Signed Date: 2006.06.27 - 05:54AM Title: One Step Ahead
...And for years and years, I just assumed that Freud was a muggle famous for the graceless, cheesy lines he used to get into womens' knickers.
Reviewer: x_sectumsempra_x Signed Date: 2006.04.27 - 05:04AM Title: One Step Ahead
Aww! That was so sweet! Poor Ginny! Bill was awesome during that. Haha. Harry's little bit at the end cracked me up. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Delani Anonymous Date: 2006.04.25 - 10:12PM Title: One Step Ahead
pah. triwizard champion...clearly I was dueling. lol. no, it was tennis...but thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2006.04.24 - 07:31PM Title: One Step Ahead
Oh yay! I thought for sure that this was the last chapter. I'm so glad its not. I loved this chapter. It was so sweet. And they're getting married now! Oh and Bill's speech was so sweet and well written. But come on Arthur! Be a man and stand up for your right as a father! And Ginny, follow tradition and leave poor misguided Hermione out of it. LOL I love this story. Nice work.
Reviewer: Delani Anonymous Date: 2006.04.22 - 06:30PM Title: One Step Ahead
HAHAH! that ol' Freud...I loved the dummies at the "rehearsal" and Harry's insistence at "waiting up," too cute. I just lost in an amazingly crappy tournament, but your piece has me so calm and content right now; thank YOU so much...
Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2006.04.21 - 01:43PM Title: One Step Ahead
Just found this story. It's a rather interesting story, or perhaps a very interesting way of looking at the characters. It's strange, at times while I was reading it I felt like "that's weird -- enough of that" and I go to leave and not come back, but the power of it is that there is something that draws me back to keep reading. So I'm not really sure how you did it, but you made me read more and more of it. :-) You have great skill in writing, I hope you develop and hone it more. Thanks for sharing your story. I look forward to the last chapter.
Reviewer: Lor48 Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 06:23PM Title: One Step Ahead
I loved it!! Absolutely hilarious sense of humor and great portrayal of Ginny.
Reviewer: May Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 06:20PM Title: One Step Ahead
as always your story has made me emotional. I was doing really good until the end bit with ginny knowing she had to leave the house of the quick and the hungry. OMG that was such a great line. I always love it when you update and this story i have to say is my favorite of all time.
Reviewer: colourmydreams Anonymous Date: 2006.04.20 - 11:10AM Title: One Step Ahead
Itís not the end! Yay! *dancing around* Great chapter, it shows the stubborn Ginny we all know and love ^^
Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 05:27AM Title: One Step Ahead
You manage to blow me away every chapter. How is that possible? The best part, of course, was Bill's question because that's the case with most of us. Even if we have a fairly healthy sense of self respect, we still often don't feel comfortable loving ourselves as if it's some childish indulgence, so we let others loves us to give us a sense of belonging and worthiness. I loved her Romilda Vane analogy. Brilliant! Brilliant! Brilliant!
Reviewer: cwarbeck Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 04:43AM Title: One Step Ahead
Oh Laura, finally, finally an update to one of my all-time favorite stories! What can I say except, you still got it, girl! Just the right bit of everything mixed all together to make a wonderful chapter. *sigh* I wish I had a big brother like Bill, too. Do we get to hear all the other brothers' attempts at speeches? I'd love to hear what George and Fred come up with. Lovely, really.
Reviewer: fairyville Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 03:39AM Title: One Step Ahead
Totally awomse chapter!
Reviewer: LolaPotter Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 02:54AM Title: One Step Ahead
nice row between the siblings and the speech was fantastic...
Reviewer: Qt4167013 Signed Date: 2006.04.20 - 12:03AM Title: One Step Ahead
I just want to say thank you. Today has been a horrible day for me and this seriously brightened my day. I really loved this part, sweet, beautiful and well worth the wait. I'm curious as to why Ginny doesn't want her father walking her down the aisle...hmm. Harry is so cute and I LOVED THE FREUD joke, partially because I am a nerd and because it was really funny. I'm sad to see this story end but readily await your next chapter. Amazing part!
Reviewer: bibliophile19 Signed Date: 2006.04.19 - 11:56PM Title: One Step Ahead