Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2014.12.17 - 07:43AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Wow, what an amazing story I just found a few days before Christmas.
Reviewer: Keira Azul Signed Date: 2007.01.19 - 07:31PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Judged for Challenge:
Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.01.19 - 04:42AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
great story! so cute! poor ginny she was proberly so angry and worried then ten times more embarressed! : )
Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 06:51AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Judged for competition
Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.01.09 - 04:25PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Judged for the competition.
Reviewer: Frelling Signed Date: 2007.01.07 - 10:57AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Nicely done. I generally don't like OCs but I understand Jaq's role in the story and Harry making his own ring makes this story different. Very well written. Reviewed for judging.
Reviewer: RSS Signed Date: 2007.01.06 - 10:19AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Judged for competition...I especially like the romantic aspect of this story and how you have creatively intertwined Harry's feelings, Ginny's feelings and Jackie's feelings. The addition of the Jaq character was a nice tribute, especially since she was such an integral part of the story. My favorite part was the scene in the garden with Harry's song, I thought it was so unique and very special. Good luck! -Rebecca
Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2007.01.03 - 06:40PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Judged for competition.
Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2006.12.27 - 10:14PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Hi, reading/reviewing as a judge for the challenge.
Reviewer: ImSoRad0485 Signed Date: 2006.12.19 - 04:32PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
I enjoyed judging this story. It was well written, although there were a couple spots here and there that didn't make sense. I liked how the twins finally put their devious minds to a good use, even though they were entirely wrong. Good luck in the Challenge, and if you decide to edit this story in any way, please contact me.
Reviewer: ginny4everandalways Signed Date: 2006.12.18 - 11:57AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Wow, what a great story! It was great to not only judge your last challenge submission, but this on was even better! It was absolutely astounding how creative and romantic you were throughout the story. This story had a great sense of flow (with all the bonus phrases!). I love how you incorporated Jaq and how she helped in the story. If I could change one thing though, it would have to be the second paragraph, it seemed to almost divert from the story, but the story was still great! Keep writing!
Reviewer: harryluvsginny Signed Date: 2006.12.17 - 11:17AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Excellent story! Write more romance and fluff! ; P Good luck in the competition (I'm a judge)! I hope you do well! Keep writing!
Reviewer: PatronyBologna Signed Date: 2006.12.13 - 06:36PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
I liked the idea of Harry creating Ginny's ring and the memory that went with it. Fake notes and all, you gotta love Fred and George! ~Patrony :)
Reviewer: Ginebra Wood Signed Date: 2006.12.12 - 05:49PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
I love the detail about Jaq and all the fic. Good luck for the challenge.
Reviewer: metamorphsickle Anonymous Date: 2006.12.12 - 04:43AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Great work with the story, I like the way you portrayed Fred and George. Also, this one makes good use of perspective, good luck for the challenge. -mark
Reviewer: minx101 Anonymous Date: 2006.12.12 - 04:37AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
This one is much better than your other story. I like fluff a lot more (:
Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.12.11 - 07:56PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Very nice. Fluffy without being too sweet. I especially enjoyed the mixed signals and mistaken assumptions that people made. It set the stage for a nice plot flow, and an even nicer resolution of matters. Jackie was an excellent original character, and the remaining cast played well off her. It is a device that I enjoy using quite often myself. There is no reason that the Weasleys cannot have female cousins. We have all the Prewitts on Molly's side, and I've seen adopted Weasleys as well. I am glad that you referenced it. Good luck with the Challenge, and thanks for an enjoyable tale. Eric B.
Reviewer: GinnyPotter101 Anonymous Date: 2006.12.11 - 05:18PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2006.12.10 - 01:20AM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
I loved this, good job! I hope you win something from this competition.
Reviewer: Miri Signed Date: 2006.12.09 - 05:26PM Title: Something's Wrong This Christmas
This is a lovely story with a truly unique engagement ring for Ginny--Harry using a special memory for the two of them to forge a ring of ruby and crystal ( or fire and ice possibly) Wow! How beautiful!