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Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.08.17 - 09:18AM Title: Family Time I am glad that the family and Dumbledore are pulling together to get ready for Voldemort. Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.05.29 - 03:26AM Title: Family Time I like this chapter very much. I provides a better insight to several characters, especially Molly and Ginny. Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.10.14 - 07:38PM Title: Family Time Well, they managed to survive the initial awkwardness of the reunion. I guess it's a good thing Dumbledore finally agreed to work with them. They will need to really watch themselves though. Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2013.06.07 - 08:26PM Title: Family Time This is a thoroughly engaging, exciting, and enjoyable story! The idea to have Harry and Ginny age overnight, effectively entering adulthood, goes a long way toward eliminating any uncomfortable aspects of such having them enter into such a deep emotional bond, especially considering the physical aspects of the relationship, with which you have so skillfully and considerately dealt. I have only one criticism that I hope you will take as constructive, since I truly love tis story. Please, when you reflect back in time, use past perfect constructions rather than reverting to present tense. It's really jarring to be reading such a well-written story and then find oneself confronted by a present sense sentence that doesn't fit in a story that is written in past tense. It isn't "Ginny can feel his emotions," but, "Ginny could feel his emotions." Please accept this as it is intended. You have put together a fantastic story with a compelling plot and excellent character development. You are building a very suspenseful story that grabs our attention and makes your readers hunger for the next installment! Great work! Thank you for sharing this story with us, and I can't wait for more! Reviewer: v_t Signed Date: 2013.05.21 - 02:01AM Title: Family Time Fantastic! !!! Reviewer: dshadel Signed Date: 2013.05.10 - 10:23PM Title: Family Time Really likening this so far. Can't wait for more Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2013.05.08 - 09:37PM Title: Family Time It's time for a trucker to do a happy dance! Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.05.08 - 08:53PM Title: Family Time
Reviewer: dseay Signed Date: 2013.05.07 - 10:42PM Title: Family Time I have only just read this story up until this point and I must say I have am really enjoying it. The one thing I miss though is a bit more of Harry/Ginny interaction and how you have them communicate among themselves. Of course having more of the Weasley always brings so much humor. Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2013.05.06 - 06:39PM Title: Family Time Great chapter! I love the idea of them having a ceremony. It would be great. Loved their bond overtaking the charms on the Burrow! Reviewer: alterdream Signed Date: 2013.05.06 - 01:12PM Title: Family Time I loved this chapter. It has a little bit of everything in it. Ok maybe not everything but many things :) Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2013.05.06 - 11:40AM Title: Family Time I would not be surprise if Molly hate Harry in some way Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2013.05.06 - 10:46AM Title: Family Time ah the kids are really trying to stir up trouble now...as for albus he is in need to more then alittle wakeup call and harry is the only one to do it.....as for molly well now she can get it thought her head that ginny is not going to bend in any way she does not want to go in the first place.....kutgw | |||||||
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