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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.06.30 - 05:43AM Title: Starting the Fight

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It seems that Malfoy slowly noticed that Harry is not a simply 13-year-old boy who can be captured easily. Fortunately, Ginny is apparently not yet on the Death Eaters display; they still know nothing about her powers. I hope that it will continue to be so.
Great Chapter! Many thanks for sharing.


Author's Response: Mallfoy had no clue he was talking to Harry Potter earlier. He and the other Death Eaters are concentrating on Harry and ignoring Ginny, for now. M.V.



Reviewer: Noellexcz Signed Date: 2013.12.16 - 09:55AM Title: Starting the Fight

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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2013.12.06 - 07:53PM Title: Starting the Fight

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Good chapter. The excitement is starting to begin.
Looking forward to more, soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and glad you enjoyed it. The ground work has been laid out and now for some action and reaction. M.V.



Reviewer: Emlyn Signed Date: 2013.12.05 - 12:33PM Title: Starting the Fight

Things are starting to heat up a bit. Sounds like there will be some tension between the two groups coming up.

Author's Response: Yes, things are going to move along now. There will still be the occasional chapter needed to set the story line. M.V.



Reviewer: Rosina Ferguson Signed Date: 2013.12.04 - 11:39PM Title: Starting the Fight

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Loved the chapter with a minor Brit-pick point... The Burrow is in Devon not Suffolk. The real village of Ottery St Mary is supposed to be next door to Ottery St Catchpole.

If you need someone to Brit-pick for you, I would be happy to oblique. Message me if you wish.

Author's Response: Oops! I forgot about where the Burrow was. I did know it was in Devon. I better go back and change that in the story. M.V.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2013.12.04 - 04:00PM Title: Starting the Fight

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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2013.12.04 - 03:55PM Title: Starting the Fight

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Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2013.12.04 - 07:23AM Title: Starting the Fight

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An exciting new chapter. The battle at the Burrow was well done and I wonder how the idea of profiling the DE will help the Order deal with them?

Author's Response: Thank you! In many ways profiling was what Dumbledore did with Tom Riddle in the books. This case it won't seem like much at first, but as the story moves along it will be relevant. M.V.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2013.12.04 - 06:09AM Title: Starting the Fight

Malfoy couldn't fine his way out of a plastic bag with out killing himself.....kutgw

Author's Response: True, but he does have the Dark Lord to help him. M.V.




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