Reviewer: ParadoxHoax Signed Date: 2015.02.25 - 09:46AM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2015.02.07 - 12:50PM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.01.21 - 06:37AM Title: Chapter 1
Ah I miss this chapter....not getting updates at all.....that's how not got hurt.....she does have a great memory but Toni's is getting put to shame in the klutz department.....kutgw
Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2015.01.12 - 10:17AM Title: Chapter 1
So, a new mystery! Excellent.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.01.12 - 12:40AM Title: Chapter 1
oh no.... Poor Nat would not experience Hogwarts Castle on a view from the boats! That is suppose to be breathtaking and all! What a wonderful OC. Muggleborn, a klutz and tiny. Bless her. Hope to hear more from her. I am so glad you seen to be writing a Next Generation nolvella which include Haryy, Ginny Ron and Hermione. Wonderful take on 19 years later.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.01.11 - 09:53PM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Marinka Signed Date: 2015.01.09 - 08:08PM Title: Chapter 1
Cute little girl:))sounds like three of them will become fast friends.
Reviewer: hpforever85 Signed Date: 2015.01.09 - 12:18AM Title: Chapter 1
Reviewer: ProfessorBinns79 Signed Date: 2015.01.08 - 10:29PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm very excited for this story! I don't know if I've read a Next Gen story that carries forward the tone and character of canon quite like this chapter does. I adore the introduction of Nat. Getting her perspective as she comes in on the middle of the story should be very interesting. She's a very Rowling-esque character. You seem to be avoiding a lot of the typical Next Gen cliches (i.e. making certain characters exact replicas of their parents...the family resemblances are there of course, but the kids are their own people). Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.01.08 - 07:25PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting development. Harry has a secret? I wonder if it has to do with his relatives and the way they treated him. I like Nat - she seems like a good friend for them. Thanks for not having Scorpius show up and blend in immediately and have one of the Potter-Weasleys fall for him.