Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.12.29 - 09:41AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One
Isn't Harry's grandmother a Muggle? Why is she acting like its the 1850s? I imagine Harry would have a great time zipping along on a little tractor and tending fields without the whole horse and plow. Planting corn in July doesn't make any sense, its too late in the season. Its a cool idea, having Harry's grandmother have a small farm, but she couldn't really rely on Harry who's away 10 months out of the year and use a horse and plow.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.08.14 - 08:43PM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One
The trial is interesting. I am eager to read what will happen next.
Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2015.07.07 - 03:23AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One
Oh, oh, poor Harry has to work harder than before when he lived in Private Drive. Fortunately, now Ginny is always around and there is always enough to eat. I hope that Ginny does not neglect Harry, now that she has a horse.
Reviewer: hgromance Signed Date: 2015.06.18 - 06:52AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One
Not sure if you're aware, but Sirius' middle name is actually Orion
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.04.14 - 06:21PM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.04.13 - 08:02AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One
If you're going to write stories about British people, please have them eat at British establishments. Your Americanisms are glaring here. It's a simple three or four steps to look up the name of an American restaurant on the internet to make sure there are franchises of said restaurant in great Britain: not every American restaurant is as world-wide as McDonald's.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.04.13 - 06:01AM Title: Chapter 11: Summer 1994 Part One
Remus almost lost the job and the curse would have continued but it's not over yet....kutgw