Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.09.19 - 08:21AM Title: Unraveled
Reviewer: destin4fl Signed Date: 2015.09.19 - 02:59AM Title: Unraveled
Damn, this chapter is a master piece. Well done!
Reviewer: yentila22 Signed Date: 2015.09.19 - 01:12AM Title: Unraveled
Bravo fabulous chapter!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.17 - 07:39PM Title: Unraveled
Such a powerful chapter. Poor Harry has to really hit bottom before he can begin to heal. The part about Harry feeling contaminated by Voldemort makes perfect sense, and of course Ginny would be able to understand better than anyone else. Harry's childhood with the Dursleys has always been so complicated. I was never certain whether we were supposed to think that he was abused, neglected, or something in between. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2015.09.17 - 12:42PM Title: Unraveled
The one section I didn't comment on was the conversation between Hermione and Ginny. While I think she'll always be blunt in expressing her opinions, I think Hermione is slowly learning to temper what she says and how she says it. I say this because it seems she learned a tiny bit when she thought Harry deserved his hangover and Ginny called her on it. Then later, when Ginny admitted to having used alcohol to escape a few times during the school year, I was glad that Hermione didn't launch into one of her preachy tirades: instead, she offered sincere sympathy that I think Ginny appreciated. Finally, if this had been three years earlier and Harry had one of his flashbacks, I think Hermione most likely would have harped about how Harry shouldn't let Voldemort into his head. Here, she shows her maturity by suggesting that the four of them quit working on the house and go have a relaxing afternoon, a sure sign that she's beginning to understand the need to sometimes keep her opinions to herself…and that's a very good thing, I think. Well done.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2015.09.17 - 11:23AM Title: Unraveled
Magnificent! Outstanding! Brilliant! Not enough superlatives for this chapter! I started out laughing at the hangover scene and ended up with tears in my eyes at the end! Finally! Finally Harry spilled the beans to Ginny! And apparentlly to Ron and Hermoine too which is a good thing! Now that he's unloaded he needs the support of all three to begin healing and leave it behind him! Liked that Arthur is wiser than he usually gets credit for! Harry needed to get all that diarkness out of his system including the abuse he suffered at the hands of the Dursleys! He needed to admit he'd been abused before he can leave it in the past! Ginny is the one person who could help Harry with having been a horcrux since she too was previously possessed by Moldyshorts! My only question is if the Dursleys had suddenly returned home during the last scene, who would your money be on to be the first to hex them? Ginny, Hermoine or
Reviewer: isabel380 Signed Date: 2015.09.17 - 09:45AM Title: Unraveled
I'm so glad Ginny finally knows the truth. Now she can help
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2015.09.16 - 11:48PM Title: Unraveled
So... you point out -- rather well, IMO -- one of the key reasons I think Harry & Ginny have a very close relationship: they "get" the sense of violation and uncleanness Tom left in his wake. Sure, it's different for each of them, but who else in the world could possibly come closer to being able to relate to that??!?
Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2015.09.16 - 09:40PM Title: Unraveled
Powerful chapter well done
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.09.16 - 01:43PM Title: Unraveled
yeap harry really needed to get that off his chest and ginny needed to hear it as well....the trio is now for sure a quad...and thats ok becuase now they can all keep an eye on everyone....kutgw
Reviewer: demonesprit Signed Date: 2015.09.16 - 12:22PM Title: Unraveled
Really excellent. The conversation between Ginny and Harry could be from canon, it's that right on. Looking forward to reading the rest of this story.
Reviewer: kitana415 Signed Date: 2015.09.16 - 09:07AM Title: Unraveled
Having Ron & Hermione show up was a nice touch! They know much more than others, but their lapses in information are glaringly large.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.09.16 - 05:19AM Title: Unraveled
Is it a good chapter if it makes you cry? Certainly is.
Reviewer: Dreaming Haven Signed Date: 2015.09.16 - 01:30AM Title: Unraveled
Heartbdeaking but beautiful the way Ginny is there for him.
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2015.09.16 - 01:17AM Title: Unraveled
Great breakdown from Harry. Please hurry with the next chapter
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2015.09.15 - 11:38PM Title: Unraveled
Wow! A real emotional breakdown on Harry's part, but maybe just what he needs? Hopefully he can start to heal now that he has finally purged himself of these terrible doubts.
Reviewer: Tourniquet Signed Date: 2015.09.15 - 11:29PM Title: Unraveled
Reviewer: hijadejewell Signed Date: 2015.09.15 - 10:49PM Title: Unraveled
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.09.15 - 09:53PM Title: Unraveled
oh dear....... where are them buckets? I need to cry too.
Reviewer: forgivenlu Signed Date: 2015.09.15 - 09:37PM Title: Unraveled
That was the most natural and the most beautiful and the most heartbreaking version of Harry's breaking point I've ever read. I love this SO very much!