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Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.09.22 - 02:50AM Title: Chapter 20: A Mermaid's Call

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Great chapter.
I'm amazed that Ginny hasn't worked out the connection between her dreams and the third task. Especially after working out the clue. She needs to share her dreams with the others.
Looking forward to the next chapter.



Reviewer: Ranma-sensei Signed Date: 2015.09.22 - 01:59AM Title: Chapter 20: A Mermaid's Call

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Nice chapter, though the time jumps again seems a little jarringly worded/placed.

Interesting that Ginny hasn't yet figured it out when even her dreams want to give her clues.



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.09.20 - 11:08AM Title: Chapter 20: A Mermaid's Call

well it looks like they are close to figrueing everything out but the one thing they are missing is how is harry going to breath down in the water for an hour....ah is it going to be a bubble head charm or gillyweed......kutgw



Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.09.20 - 10:13AM Title: Chapter 20: A Mermaid's Call

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Interesting chapter. I am really enjoying this story and hope you will be able to post again soon. Ginny needs to share her dreams with Harry more quickly so that he can solve some of his problems.




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