Reviewer: hawkeye2008 Signed Date: 2017.10.12 - 05:29PM Title: Chapter 18
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2015.11.09 - 04:06AM Title: Chapter 18
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2015.11.02 - 08:50PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter. I am really enjoying this story. The characters are complex but still believable.Looking forward to seeing what will happen next to Nat and Caroline, as well as all of the Potters and Weasleys.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2015.11.01 - 01:18PM Title: Chapter 18
Whoa.... my heart is raising..... Who on earth nominated this story as comedy? This is drama, angst, adventure, family but not comedy! Anyway, gresat job.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2015.10.30 - 11:35PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh no! Interesting developments. I hope that Polly really does have the girls hidden. It was a good thing that Al remembered the map - it might be a good idea to make a copy for emergencies.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2015.10.30 - 08:25PM Title: Chapter 18
Ah crazy time make the mind not work....as for al he made one smart move get polly to hid the girls fast....kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2015.10.30 - 05:35PM Title: Chapter 18