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Reviewer: wq123 Anonymous Date: 2016.04.18 - 11:03PM Title: Chapter 1: Shades Of Black

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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.04.12 - 12:26PM Title: Chapter 1: Shades Of Black

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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2016.04.11 - 08:18PM Title: Chapter 1: Shades Of Black

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It would be nice to see a bit of Harry. The relationships aren't really established very well. There is a lot of dialogue and very little description. Why did they go to this place? Whose is it? What does it look like? Presumably it is the Potter's home in some way. Mabel seems to be the estate manager and she apparently knows Sirius and Remus. How is Sirius doing raising Harry? It would be nice to see a bit of that relationship. The only actions we see of Harry's is of him bullying a house elf - not nice. He's waiting for the Malfoys? Why? Not a good sign of things to come.




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