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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.09.26 - 10:09AM Title: Chapter 12 Party at the Manor

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It's good to see that the kids had some fun.
Poor Harry, if it becomes convivial, he's usually excluded. No wonder that he hasn't many friends at Hogwarts.
I wonder if we've seen the future Yule Ball couples dancing together at the end of the party.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I fully admit that the dancing at the end of the party was due to the upcoming Yule Ball. It is a shame Harry was unable to attend. Escaping the Dursleys was rarely simple.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.09.08 - 07:26PM Title: Chapter 12 Party at the Manor

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Delightful party! Just hate that poor Harry was stuck at the Dursleys! Wonder if anyone realized it was Harry's birthday, too?!
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Author's Response: Yes, poor Harry is still at the Dursleys. It would have been fun to have him at the party, but of course it would not be allowed. At least he will soon be at the Quidditch World Cup!!! Thank you so much for reviewing!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.09.08 - 02:30PM Title: Chapter 12 Party at the Manor

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Ah, yes, fourteen is just about right for having a more mature sort of birthday party. Rather sneaky of Augusta to start preparing her grandson and niece for the Yule Ball! That will certainly make both of them much more confident when it comes time for choosing a partner and actually attending the ball. Also, I'm glad Neville was able to show Ginny his new skills. Hopefully, she won't fear for her toes when he takes her to the dance...

I loved Arthur's comment that sometimes it's best to be the observer. He was able to put Ron at ease for not having a partner when Neville and Seamus were dancing with Anna and Ginny.

I'm glad both Ron and Ginny had a good time at the party. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Augusta is a rather shrewd lady and well enough connected that she would likely know about the upcoming Yule Ball. I also believe they are the type of family where learning how to dance for social functions would be expected. Ginny won't have to fear for her toes at all! I'm glad you liked the conversation between Ron and Arthur at the end. I've always thought he was a pretty awesome dad, and Ron always seems quick to turn to his father for advice or information.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.09.08 - 08:44AM Title: Chapter 12 Party at the Manor

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Nice chapter, I think Ron was feeling a bit left/put out

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I believe that Ron really was okay being an observer at the end of the party. Everyone matures at different times and he will become interested in girls soon, or at least he will realize that one of his best friends is a girl!




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