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Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2016.11.19 - 01:27AM Title: Chapter 1
I think Hugo has several rude awakenings ahead of him. Then again, given the way he took the ones in this story...
Par for the course for a boy of his age.
A hilarious story. I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2016.11.12 - 12:44AM Title: Chapter 1
This was excellent! At first I was a little wary of something Hugo-centric - I mean who is he anyway? But it has been done well indeed!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.11.03 - 07:31PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this look into a teenagers thoughts and moods...like a pendulum swinging back and forth but up and down as well!! And also how they think they're grown up but are still so innocent.
And of course the secret too 😄
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Reviewer: PhoenixFeather2 Signed Date: 2016.10.18 - 11:23PM Title: Chapter 1
Seriously hilarious! It's like being inside a younger Ron's head :-)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.09.25 - 08:01AM Title: Chapter 1
Hugo is more lost then his dad...as for vic and ted well they would have been fine if they just came out and said what had happen....its not like the woman dont know the signs and the men would just follow their lead....kutgw
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.09.19 - 10:09AM Title: Chapter 1
Very good story.
Your Hugo was exactly like a miniature Hermione. Trying to get everyone 'sorted' in his own way.
Good luck for the challenge.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2016.09.17 - 06:04AM Title: Chapter 1
Such a great story, your Hugo was exactly as I imagine him and even Lily and Lucy to be. Namelly, In their older cousins business!!He was very much son of Hermione, and this was a great story for the challenge, well done and good luck xx
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.09.15 - 09:58AM Title: Chapter 1
Very amusing. Hugo is definitely oblivious and a bit well, up himself, in his mannerisms which made for an entertaining read :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: aimless Signed Date: 2016.09.15 - 06:39AM Title: Chapter 1
Nicely done )))).
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2016.09.15 - 06:18AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Poor Hugo is a bit of a disaster, but I suppose most young teenage boys are. Lovely ending!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.09.14 - 08:36AM Title: Chapter 1
The voice of a thirteen-year-old boy! Classic! Spots, grudges, crushes and cluelessness are so part of that age. You've done very well expressing Hugo's point of view while telling the family story. Well done.
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.09.14 - 08:26AM Title: Chapter 1
Brill! A perfect response to the Challenge!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.09.14 - 06:26AM Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely brilliant. Adrian Mole stand aside.
Author's Response: Aww thank you!
Reviewer: Lokken Signed Date: 2016.09.14 - 05:41AM Title: Chapter 1
Hilarious! Excellent take on current challenge! Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: crystaltips1 Signed Date: 2016.09.14 - 04:27AM Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic! Best comedy one shot I have read in ages. Loved his best friend was called Adrian.
Author's Response: Aww thank you :) Yes, had to have a nod to Sue Townsend and Adrian Mole <3
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2016.09.14 - 02:47AM Title: Chapter 1
Hugo is not a character I've ever seen get much attention but your portrayal of him and his view of the Weasley-Potter family was great fun to read.
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2016.09.14 - 12:38AM Title: Chapter 1
This was excellent. Hugo is a so funny and the narrative is perfectly brilliant. I loved this little glimpse into the Weasley/Potter family life, and the fact that it was funny and Hugo's "teenager-ness" was spot on. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2016.09.14 - 12:17AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! That was hysterical! I loved how Hugo completely misinterpreted everything. Having teen age children myself, the self centered melodrama is so spot on! A great look at the next generation.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :D I had my own teenage siblings a constant, irritating source of inspiration.
Reviewer: Kneazle_NZ Signed Date: 2016.09.13 - 09:36PM Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Really great take on the Weasley/Potter clan. I liked your reference to the inspiration material by naming Hugo's friend Adrian!
Author's Response: Thank you :D Had to have a nod to Sue Townsend in there somewhere!
