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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.09.27 - 02:51AM Title: Chapter 14 Quidditch World Cup

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Anna's blood ritual seems to be useful for many things. I wonder (and doubt) if she knows all the effects of this ritual. She can only hope that Hermione will not find out about the ritual. She would be busy with a blood ritual research project for the complete next term, lol.
Great chapter, thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Love your comments about Hermione. I can almost see the wheels turning in her head!



Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2016.09.24 - 10:20AM Title: Chapter 14 Quidditch World Cup

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Great chapter.
Description of the World Cup was great. The aftermath was interesting, also. Thank goodness for Anna's secret.
Looking forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!



Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.09.22 - 11:23AM Title: Chapter 14 Quidditch World Cup

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It seems the cat's out of the bag on the subject of why Anna cuts her hand. She did a good job of keeping the group safe after the game and used a positive way for her to let her friends know that the cutting has a purpose. I'm sure that in future chapters more information about how Anna uses this circle will come to light.

I think what I like most about this chapter is seeing the events from GoF from someone else's perspective. I'm glad you chose Ginny because I think she'll be one of the first to understand why Anna needs this spell and has been keeping it from her friends. Also, I see you're already pairing her off with Neville in preparation for the Yule Ball!

Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes indeed Anna's choice in the woods makes it impossible for her to continue to hide certain things from her friends. Fortunately, the Weasleys are a trustworthy family. I'm glad that you're enjoying GoF from a different perspective. It is fun to write about this school year through the eyes of others!



Reviewer: RighT3rantZ Signed Date: 2016.09.22 - 10:00AM Title: Chapter 14 Quidditch World Cup

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I find it interesting that Anna seems to be kind of a metaphor for kids that cut themselves as a method of coping. There is obviously a magical protective element that gets evoked in her situation, but the parallels are difficult to ignore. Was this intentional?

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! It was not intentional, but I must admit that I don't actually know much about cutting. I will have to do some research to educate myself! In this story, I see Anna using her blood to intensify the power of her spells while at the same time containing her magic within a defined space.



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.09.21 - 01:56PM Title: Chapter 14 Quidditch World Cup

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WOW! A lot of excitement in this chapter for sure! Great Quiddich match! Anna is certainly full of surprises! Something tells she has powers noone knows about yet! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the Quidditch match. Even following GofF I found it rather challenging to write!




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