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Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2016.10.20 - 11:01AM Title: Chapter 16 Back to Hogwarts

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This is a nice transition chapter. I like how you filled in the blanks in the train ride by having Neville and Anna visit other compartments while Malfoy made his appearance in Ron, Hermione and Harry's compartment. I'm glad Anna was there for Neville after his trip to Moody's office. Even if they didn't talk much, having someone there for him will help Neville with his troubles. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I decided that on a long train ride, it would be reasonable for people to walk around and visit with friends a bit. I'm glad you liked it!



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.10.10 - 05:32AM Title: Chapter 16 Back to Hogwarts

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I was somewhat surprised that Ginny was allowed to sit in the same compartment with Harry and Hermione. Ron usually took care that his little sister didn't come near his best friends. Is it because Ginny doesn't have a crush on Harry in this story? At least there have been no signs so far.
It's a thing that always puzzled me in the books. JKR made such a big deal on how saving Hermione from a troll cemented their relationship but when Harry saves Ginny from the Basilisk, nada. The two of them never even talked about their shared experiences in the chamber. Made no sense to me and actually irritated me. Oops, I wandered from the subject. This has nothing to do with your story because it's more Anna&Neville centred.

Many thanks for another well-written chapter. The next chapter is probably about the TWT. I'm curious if you'll stick to the canon and nobody will believe Harry that he hasn't thrown his name into the goblet.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I am trying to slowly, and hopefully casually, have the group of friends that is Harry, Ron, and Hermione becoming friendlier over time with the group of friends that is Ginny, Neville, and Anna. With that in mind and with the events that happened in the woods after the World Cup being somewhat more disturbing than in GoF, I thought it would be believable that all six of them might stick together for the train ride (at least sit together for most of it!). I am mostly following canon (at least for the major events, for a while), so the selection of champions will be coming soon!!!



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2016.10.09 - 03:58PM Title: Chapter 16 Back to Hogwarts

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Kind of a tame chapter here! Like how you tweak events here and there, like having Moody(Crouch Jr) show up earlier than the film had it! Will be interested to see what you do with the Goblet! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Agreed! It was a rather tame chapter. The Triwizard Tournament approaches. Thank you for reviewing!



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.10.08 - 07:39PM Title: Chapter 16 Back to Hogwarts

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Good chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review!



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.10.08 - 11:58AM Title: Chapter 16 Back to Hogwarts

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I have never had it but "butterscotch bread pudding" sounds very tasty.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have a terrible weakness for bread pudding.




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