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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.11.28 - 08:33PM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

Definitely exciting, raising lots of questions that make me want to read on...great opening chapter

Author's Response: Thanks again - for all the reviews!



Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2016.11.27 - 07:36PM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Definitely exciting, raising lots of questions that make me want to read on...great opening chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much!



Reviewer: pleurocoelus Signed Date: 2016.11.19 - 12:07AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

This is a fascinating story. I thought the bit about degrees of magical inheritance made sense. And, of course the cliffhanger. Good thing the story is complete!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I think cliffhangers are more fun to write than read :)



Reviewer: BobVosh Signed Date: 2016.11.06 - 05:08AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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I'm enjoying it so far.

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Mfder Signed Date: 2016.10.31 - 02:17AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Intriguing.. Great chapter. Thanks

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: Brennus Signed Date: 2016.10.30 - 07:50AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Yes, Sharon's back! Long time no speak. Nice to see you posting again and a very intriguing story you've come up with, too. I'm looking forward to finding out what mysterious secret has been intrusted to the Prewitt line.

I've been a visitor to the British Museum many times and always make a point to see the Sutton Hoo helmet and associated exhibits, although I'm miffed the staff never let me try the helmet on. I think it would suit me nicely (i.e. it would cover my face).

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Mark! I studied the British Museum website wishing I could go visit. Those museum guards are always a bit picky about people leaving the artifacts alone - go figure. Lots of British history in the next chapter.



Reviewer: Lokken Signed Date: 2016.10.30 - 06:36AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Just another serving of awesomeness from one of my favorite writer's! Secret duty, old relic, relationships... what's not to like? Lets just hope that Hermione won't mess this up!

Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry, not too much Hermione in this one.



Reviewer: dronvire Signed Date: 2016.10.30 - 01:07AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Reviewer: GinnyP7 Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 01:58PM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Very interesting start. I look forward to reading more.
Still,I am wondering if you've abandoned "Perilous Journey". Hopefully not.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! No, I have not abandoned 'Perilous Journey' - I've just been distracted. It will be finished.



Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 11:39AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Ooh, the plot thickens! Really good and interesting start to the story.
I love the little references to Harry and Ginny's relationship in the latter part of the chapter and I really look forward to reading more :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! There will be more Harry/Ginny as the story evolves.



Reviewer: Dobby98 Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 10:39AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Great beginning, I love it!
I wonder what'll happen now and look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: trigg Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 10:16AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 06:27AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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It's a quite intriguing start. I loved it.
I was somewhat surprised that the long-awaited event happened after Voldemort's downfall. Hence I'm really curious what this secret is all about.

Author's Response: Thanks! The secret or at least part of it will be revealed in the next chapter.



Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 06:21AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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I always feel a bit bad for speaking over another review, but I frankly found some real sweetness in the manner in which the H/G relationship was alluded to in the latter part of this chapter. I wouldn't be surprised if we see some more of that.

There are other things to like about this story, of course. You have real 1998 intrigue, and have studious averted any glimpses to what lies behind your hand. Being who I am, though, I find myself stewing over old timelines (both JKR and Muggle), wondering if those Plantagenet lions are also (or actually) Gryffindor lions; wondering what historical context might emerge in the late 1400's. Basically just wondering stuff...

Also wondering whether Hermione's collision course will be with Ginny or with Molly? Both could get a bit... sparky :)

Anxiously awaiting the next installment!

Author's Response: Thank you! There will be some Harry/Ginny in later chapters. The next chapter will go into the history - both Muggle and wizarding. They surprisingly match up very well. Hope you continue to enjoy it!



Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 01:15AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

Well t lease the artifact waited until the end of the war to move around....kutgw

Author's Response: It is a well behaved artifact :). Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2016.10.29 - 12:14AM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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I think that this is well written story, but I rather read story's that Harry is main character. So when I come across a story that Harry is not really in the story, I put the best review I can. even if I had little interested in the story

Author's Response: Thanks! I do understand. There will be more Harry/Ginny as the story evolves, but the story revolves around the House of Prewett's duty. Thanks for the review.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2016.10.28 - 11:17PM Title: Chapter 1 A Family Duty

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Excellent start; intriguing.

Author's Response: Thank you !




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