Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2017.01.13 - 11:36PM Title: Chapter 7: A Game At Dinner
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 06:36PM Title: Chapter 7: A Game At Dinner
I just read all seven chapters, and I am really enjoying your story. The premise is interesting and plausible, and your writing is mostly very well done. You may want to have a friend read and edit each chapter before posting to correct spelling, grammar, and occasional word usage mistakes. Looking forward to reading your next chapter and finding out what happens in second year.
Reviewer: BkRmGrl87 Signed Date: 2016.12.31 - 12:19PM Title: Chapter 7: A Game At Dinner
Oh.... what a cliffhanger! This is a really interesting story. Great start so far. I can't wait to see what you have planned for year two. Good luck!
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2016.12.30 - 08:04PM Title: Chapter 7: A Game At Dinner
O eck! Been a while.