Reviewer: Gin110881SignedDate: 2017.01.03 - 08:41AM
Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
That's a quite intriguing introduction into the story. I really like your approach and I'm looking forward to reading more.
My only complaint is that, due to the en bloc format, the text is a wee bit hard to read. (Yeah, I know I'm a wisenheimer, I've never transmitted a story myself)