Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 10:05AM Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts
It's been a quite intriguing Sorting Ceremony. I'm curious which Head of House will hand over their schedules, and what school robes the two of them will wear. Molly was surprisingly calm about the Bond, lol.
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 04:55AM Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts
This started really interesting, but you seem to be going faster and faster as if you want to get it finished.
Reviewer: dronvire Signed Date: 2017.01.03 - 12:12AM Title: Chapter 3: Hogwarts
Your basic story idea seems alright so far but you're rushing it. Don't forget to tell about why Sirius was not in Azkaban and how Harry knows Tonks' aura when he hasn't met her yet.