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Reviewer: tapik Signed Date: 2024.04.06 - 11:18AM Title: Chapter 30
Be able to uncover magically hidden corpses is intriguing ability. Natalie, Teddy, and Al could be a great future of Aurors office! I can imagine a bunch of novels based on crimes investigated by this trio.
Just minor thing - I would assume that Harry would tell Nat something like "Don't worry, everything will be fine, I won't say a word about your ability."
Author's Response: Yeah, in hindsight I maybe should have included him saying something like that
Reviewer: HGRHfan35 Signed Date: 2021.04.05 - 05:55AM Title: Chapter 30
What are the chances of a body, related to the Aurors, buried near that house.....
Author's Response: :D Probably high if it's planted there...
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.07.24 - 03:35PM Title: Chapter 30
I love that they went to the Outer Banks. We used to go to the Outer Banks during the summer when I was a child - loved it. I remember going to see 'The Lost Colony'. Poor Nat ends up needing to help everywhere. The conversations between Lily and Nat were very unsettling - I don't know exactly why, but they were uncomfortable. It seems like both Nat and Al have taken a few step backwards as far as their maturity. I can see Nat feeling self-conscious and not feeling attractive, but she's no even accepting there is a possibility of Al finding her attractive. Her goal of wanting a house and family is wonderful, but I can see if not being popular. I imagine Hermione would fall over if her daughter told her that.
Author's Response: Oh yeah, my annoyance with modern society is that not all ambition is acceptable for a woman. Nat will start to rebound, a bit, but being sick has really done something to her that it didn't do before. It will become more obvious that she feels like "damaged goods"
Reviewer: melipy Signed Date: 2017.03.04 - 06:06AM Title: Chapter 30
What a great chapter! Lily is just so lovable and Al is adorable and the Hinny is always on point. I really appreciate you still working and sharing this story with us.
Author's Response: Thank you for continuing to read along :)
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.03.03 - 12:40AM Title: Chapter 30
Great chapter! Really enjoying the way you write about events and tie the characters together. Nat is a wonderful character who deserves a break from the hand she's been dealt.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, it's a rough road but it will be worth it in the end for her ;)
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.03.02 - 03:38PM Title: Chapter 30
I just want to hug Natalie, but the thought occurred to me at the beginning of this chapter that her parents are leaving her a lot with another family. Her dad used to take her with him be he should give up some of his life style to be with her more. Will we find out who killed Samuel Kingston?
Author's Response: The problem is her father can't protect her or care for her medically, so it's not that she can really go with him anymore.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.03.01 - 12:51AM Title: Chapter 30
Dr. Temperence Brennan, the lead character in Bones. That is Nat'ls second dream job. Her first is to have a family. It is not really too much to ask. Bless her. How marvellous that Lily can keep her own thoughts about Al liking Nat. it is a very mature and responsible thing to do, bless her.
Author's Response: It's a good job! Freelance anthropologist :D
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.02.28 - 10:27PM Title: Chapter 30
You really want Nat to suffer more then she alreay has......not cool....I mean I know her body is not up to sunf but still way to kill a girls spirt......Glad the girls had a chance to have girl time away from Al and james. KUTGW
Author's Response: life is not easy, especially when you're the plaything of an author. It's an occupational hazard :D
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2017.02.28 - 04:48PM Title: Chapter 30
Poor Nat! She doesn't seem to be doing too well. Hopefully this vacation will help, at least if she stops finding scary magical visions! I'm glad Harry and Ginny are getting some time away, too. They certainly deserve it.
Author's Response: Indeed. More with Harry and James next chapter ;)
