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Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.07.24 - 03:43PM Title: Chapter 31
James and Al are repairing their relationship and it is great! I hope Al actually listens to his older brother for once. It is nice to see Nat enjoying using her gift. I love how you write Harry and Ginny - they have a healthy and vibrant relationship.
Author's Response: I'm trying to keep Harry and Ginny really, too. I had someone who complained about me saying they would take each other for granted and it was just so clear that they hadn't been married for any length of time. That's normal stuff.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.04.05 - 05:50AM Title: Chapter 31
A rather melancholy chapter, but one filled with interesting conversations. I particularly enjoyed the scene between James and Albus as they talked about the girls in their lives. James offered quite the revelation about his feelings for Caroline and his intentions, or perhaps I should say lack thereof. Very powerful moment.
Author's Response: James and Caroline will be a roller coaster for a long time. But we're laying foundation right now. James is going to need his brother, and same in reverse.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.04.04 - 08:54PM Title: Chapter 31
Well im glad to see al and james talk about the issues at hand, but im sorry to see al didn't go with to richmond.....as for nat she should open up more with al and then maybe she would see what she thinks she sees....as for james he may get there in the end....kutgw
Author's Response: I'll be building relationships for awhile. A long while. Everyone will be throwing tomatoes at me before it's all said and done.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.04.03 - 09:39PM Title: Chapter 31
I apologise for the errors of my review for this story. I cannot see the white writing that is used for reviews. Not only is the typo tiny but using white letter in instead of black does not help at all.
Author's Response: It's fine, no worries! I didn't notice any
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.04.03 - 09:35PM Title: Chapter 31
Hello there. Thank you for this update. I still owe you 3 or 4 fdvidsss for your original novels. The first 3 of the 7 novels you wrote were excellent and I could hardly stop. Unfortunately, so may thinks happened at the same time and I had to give reading books abreak. I had leg and ankle inflammations, blood tests with medical confusion, an onset of menopause and t top it all, bed bug infestation. I should get back to reading your 4 novels which I am sure is as good as the other 3 I have read very soon. You are indeed an excellent write and storyteller. As for the grammatical mistakes, there are only very very few and for fan fiction, it is ok. The important thing s that your plot, characters and story hold the reader's interest. I so look forward to the next update. KUDOS to your original books. They are excellent read and I urge anyone reading g this review to take up Yellowitch's offer of a complimentary read in exchange for reviews. It is worth reading and reviewing.
Author's Response: Oh man, I'm so sorry you got hurt! That's the pits. I appreciate your continuing to read and your kind words :)
