SIYE Time:23:50 on 15th January 2019

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Reviewer: moonpaw Signed Date: 2017.05.21 - 11:20AM Title: Suffering


I am so excited that this story is getting more chapters! I feel like when I first started it, I thought it was going to be a one-shot deal. Then a few more chapters got added, and it was just so satisfying to see James and Annie develop what feels like a natural relationship, building off of their history and a new attraction. I'm also wondering if the Bloodstone is what allowed Jacqui past the Muggle-repelling charm at Drakeshaugh (Ginny seemed surprised that Jacqui could just walk right up, or something along those lines)...or am I totally off? I always had the impression that something about Jacqui was...not entirely muggle.

Author's Response: I'm beginning to realise that this is going to be as long as Strangers! That wasn't the original plan, but James and Annie have a lot to deal with. Good guess about the bloodstone. Not entirely Muggle is a good way to put it. -N-

Reviewer: HPmum2014 Signed Date: 2017.05.20 - 09:16PM Title: Suffering

Great chapter. I love James and Annies easy flowing teasing, history together yet discovering new things about each other. What really sticks out to me is you obvious knowledge of the area/locations you are writing about whuch just adds to the enjoyment of the chapter and story, even in your prequel ( if you will) SAD story. Really enjoying this story immensely xx

Author's Response: Annie and James knew each other for years. I have a timeline for what's happened in the intervening years. They have a lot to discover (particularly Annie!). I'm more familiar with North East England than with Yorkshire and Derbyshire. It's a very long time since I was at Castleton, but it wasn't difficult to remind myself. -N-

Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.05.20 - 07:57PM Title: Suffering


I'm very curious about the bloodstone claw pendant that Annie has. Is it important to the plot or just a red herring? I don't actually expect an answer to that! James is definitely proving himself to be a decent guy. The relationship developing between James and Annie is wonderful and genuine. I'm glad they are tentative and not too certain of themselves.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It's good to hear that the relationship is genuine, and tentative. That was my plan. -N-

Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2017.05.20 - 01:00PM Title: Suffering

Annie is getting over Simon and noticing how James is a kind person. I really like him and this ship.

Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2017.05.20 - 01:00PM Title: Suffering


Annie is getting over Simon and noticing how James is a kind person. I really like him and this ship.

Author's Response: Thanks, James is certainly getting to her. -N-

Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.05.20 - 07:13AM Title: Suffering

Ah the flash backs are fun to see the kids grow up more and for anne she has made hermark in james mind and can at lease keep up and beat him in remarks...kutgw

Author's Response: The bantering between these two is a great driver for this story. -N-

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