Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.02.24 - 12:17AM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
One of my favourite updates. I like the fact that Harry’s guilt and suspicions are highlihgted in equal measure.
Reviewer: mcepl Signed Date: 2018.02.12 - 05:32PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
I really like James & Me, I have read and re-read (and re-listened via TTS) this story many many times, but this chapter always feels wrong. I had hard time to figure out what's wrong with it, and I think I have finally some thought: there is just not enough plot in it. I could summarize this chapter in two sentences (and I think I am generous): Harry comes home, and Ginny tells him The Seven were in Drakeshaw. Harry is then worried kids broke International Statute of Secrecy. That is not enough stuff for whole chapter. You can add some fluff with Ginny fixing garden and some random facts spread through the chapter, but it still feels really thin.
Reviewer: mcepl Signed Date: 2017.09.20 - 10:27AM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
Damn you! I couldn't sleep and spent three hours rehearsing my head a huge trial of Harry Potter v. extremely suspicious Wizengamot & Obliviator Patterson (Perry Mason meet Dolores Umbridge/Cornelius Fudge).
Reviewer: Ginnys twin Signed Date: 2017.08.31 - 05:26PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
Reviewer: fi103r Signed Date: 2017.06.19 - 11:12PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: pcoates Signed Date: 2017.06.19 - 07:48PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
All about context.
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2017.06.19 - 08:00AM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
I agree with Ginny. Harry needs to back off and mind his own business. Having said that, I'm curious and concerned about all of the obliviations the children apparently experienced over the years.
Reviewer: mjc Signed Date: 2017.06.18 - 10:36PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
Hmmm...it looks like the fecal matter is about to impact the oscillating air movement device.
Reviewer: rbrt_emmer Signed Date: 2017.06.18 - 09:03PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
Intriguing! Glad to see that Harry didn't order his own kids, niece and nephew to be obliviated. I look forward to all the parties meeting up.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2017.06.18 - 06:44PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
yay! an update. I am so dancing! thank you for giving me worries. lol. glad to know Harry is a worry wart and Ginny is there to make sure he does not do anything he will regret!
Reviewer: lunagranger Signed Date: 2017.06.18 - 06:44PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
It's amazing how much information you put in this little reminiscence chapter! And it is everything such a natural part of their conversation! So Annie was right in not liking the obliviator. Her instincts were right. He was probably already planning something. And I love that they went back to Sheffield by portkey. That means they told their friends about magic. I was reckoning they would have to, because how else their friends can be protected? But that is a problem, the kids of the Head Auror and the Minister of Magic all together breaking the law. Well, James can marry Annie and then it is allowed.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2017.06.18 - 04:24PM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
Interesting. Its always hard when the kids are that age - when to intervene and when to let them be. I can see Harry, as someone who didn't have anyone watching out for him, wanting to be a bit overprotective. Interesting about the Obliviator. Annie seems to be remembering things from both when Ginny and Harry Obliviated her as well as the Obliviator. It was funny how Harry and Ginny both dismissed Annie and James snogging out of hand - hope they will be pleasantly surprised. Hope the kids don't get into any trouble.
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2017.06.18 - 10:23AM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
Oh harry harry harry...what a can of worms you have opened now....kutgw
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2017.06.18 - 06:49AM Title: Common Piece: Potters Alarmed
Hey! Fathers day present.