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Reviewer: GHL Signed Date: 2018.01.20 - 06:11PM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons


Another fine chapter! A very minor point, if I might, is that in the sentence, "Anna was pouring over one of the esoteric..." I'm fairly certain you want 'poring'. The former tends to attract silly puns, none of which I will encourage here. :)

Author's Response: Oops! You are quite correct :) I will have to fix that. Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Truthrowan Signed Date: 2017.12.01 - 12:28AM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons


I really enjoyed this chapter, but am yet again left waiting for more! Thank you for writing such an enchanting story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: ginnyweasley777 Signed Date: 2017.11.30 - 04:04AM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons


Yay, Harry finally found some of that Gryffindor courage and kissed Ginny! Well done to Sirius to for giving him the nudge.

Can't wait for Charlie's arrival. Lovely chapter as always :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! A little nudge and an opportunity were all Harry needed;)

Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2017.11.27 - 06:35AM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons


Dancing school ... that quite certainly was a fascinating time, with a lot of funny incidents...unfortunately it's been almost half a century ago.

It felt like Christmas came early when Harry finally found his Gryffindor courage...did he recognize what the third fragrance of Amortentia was? Well, I reckon he was a wee bit too excited to make the connection between the flowery scents, lol.

Let's hope Anna will soon make the right choice in her betrothal business. I’m glad that Neville is present at her rendezvous with Charlie, so there’s someone who’ll tell us all the details... ;-)

Great chapter. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I had fun writing the dancing lessons scene, particularly Harry finding a quiet moment to have with Ginny. More on Charlie and Anna very soon.... Your comment about Neville has me grinning!!!

Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2017.11.27 - 12:53AM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons

Good chapter. Finally Harry and Ginny get together. The one thing that JKR never touched on was the reaction of the other Wesley's about their relationship. Are you?

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! To answer your question in a single word, yes!

Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2017.11.26 - 07:55PM Title: Chapter 18 Dancing Lessons


Zip-a-dee-doo-dah, zip-a-dee-ay My, oh, my, what a wonderful day! A brand new chapter has come my way, zip-a-dee-doo-dah zip-a-dee-ay! And what a brilliant chapter it is! First a passionate kiss between Harry and GInny and then he has the kahoonas to ask her to be his girlfriend - kudos to Sirius "Dr. Love" Black for his spot on advice to Harry)! Ron still has lousy timing! And another horcrux bites the dust (kind of like it was Sirius weildng the sword instead of Ron)! Especially glad Anna wants to have Charlie over to the manor for tea and a walk in the garden! Maybe she understood those amortentia smells after all! ! BTW, you might consider having a contest to see who comes up with the best idea for Dorko's unfortunate accident(wink wink)! Can't wait for the next one!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm very glad you enjoyed Harry and Ginny's moment following the dancing lesson. I know it was a slow build up, but they are finally together! As for the locket Horcrux, I really wanted it to be Sirius for lots of reasons (his brother's sacrifice, Kreacher's efforts, the fact it resided in his house for years, and because I think adults should be handling the bulk of the fight against old Voldy for as long as possible). More on Charlie and Anna soon.... I love your idea of a contest on the best idea for Dorko and am very curious about your thoughts on the subject. Feel free to share!

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