Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.01.28 - 11:09AM Title: Ghosts and Phantoms
Poor harry he will never win with Ron and George but then again George at least see what Ron wonít admit...kutgw. Glad Ginny stoped by where Fred last stood...
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.01.23 - 11:57PM Title: Ghosts and Phantoms
These first two chapters are remarkably well done. I must have read close to fifty attempts to cover the period when Harry is in training and Ginny is back at Hogwarts, and all of them seem quite tedious ... all of them, that is, except this story. I love your character development, including the in-depth look at all of the characters' evolving emotional states of mind, as well as the differing reactions that each of the main characters have to the same events. But even beyond the main characters, I find myself deeply touched by the reunion of Ginny and her friends, with each person having experienced the Battle of Hogwarts and all the events of Ginny's sixth year, including the impact of the Muggle-born Registration Commission differently. In fact, one of the things that disappointed me the most about JKR's epilogue was her fractional sentence telling us the innocent prisoners had been released from Azkeban. Right! But in what state of mental health? Wouldn't each of these folks have experienced their incarceration differently in the context of their own emotional condition and strength upon entry ... just like each of the students who suffered under the Carrows would fare differently upon their return to school both in Gnny's sixth year, AND now, as they return to a more normalized experience under Professor McGonagall. Then you round things out with their individual reactions to both Hermione and Luna! Well, I will quit blathering on! Your approach is much different than the one I chose to set up in my attempt at an epilogue, and you have set the bar high for my intended sequel. Thank you for posting this beautifully written and well thought-out story!
Reviewer: snarky24 Signed Date: 2018.01.14 - 09:18PM Title: Ghosts and Phantoms
I liked how Ginny took a moment to visit the place where Fred died. Very well-written! I also like your take on Astoria. My favorite part was all the teasing at the Leaky Cauldron! I know it nettles Harry, but itís endearing at the same time!
Reviewer: MollyandArthur Signed Date: 2018.01.12 - 08:06PM Title: Ghosts and Phantoms
Poor Harry! He really does have rotten luck. Unfortunately he may not be able to be out in public for a while longer. Someone needs to teach George to watch his mouth, perhaps Angelina. Great update!
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.01.12 - 01:01AM Title: Ghosts and Phantoms
Lol. Love the ending. Sad to hear Susan Bones did no make it. You mentioned the Patronus. Will this play a part in another Harry is a very powerful wizrd sceario? Cannot wait. Did the others even r and can do a wronski faint?know that Harry is an excellent seeke
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 11:51PM Title: Ghosts and Phantoms
Great chapter. I'm glad you brought Astoria in. I doubt Harry will ever go out with Ron and George again. I hope the press didn't hear because whether or not Harry and Ginny have been together is really no one's business.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.01.11 - 08:54AM Title: Ghosts and Phantoms
Great chapter! It's a difficult adjustment after you've been in a war! Glad to see Harry and Ginny are communicating! Poor Harry can't catch a break with the press! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: Hank Signed Date: 2018.01.10 - 10:45PM Title: Ghosts and Phantoms
Ah, what are friends for if not to get you into as much trouble as they can! Gotta love Ron and George. I'm beginning to think Harry should have gone with Ginny and told Shacklebolt that he could borrow him during the weekends.... Excellent update!