Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.04.24 - 11:43AM Title: Breathe
What a heartbreakingly sweet story... I've wondered a lot about why Ginny would make the transition from professional quidditch player to journalist. And it usually comes back to children. I like that you let this tragedy make it's obvious impact, but the ripples continue to shape H & G's lives without consuming them. This is a tough subject, but their reactions feel real and honest. Well done!
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.04.16 - 09:56PM Title: Breathe
Outstanding story! I loved the set-up and the delivery ... everything fell right into place. You do such a good job demonstrating the love between Harry and Ginny -- the complete understanding -- the equal give and take. This is so well worth while! I hate to mention that the grammar needs some work, but otherwise, this was just lovely!
Reviewer: Arnel Signed Date: 2018.04.09 - 11:52AM Title: Breathe
Ah, so this is your version of how James Sirius is conceived. Joy out of sadness is the best thing possible. Well done.
Reviewer: carolyn jinn Signed Date: 2018.03.31 - 08:29AM Title: Breathe
Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2018.03.21 - 03:45PM Title: Breathe
Love this. This is a wonderful portrayal of a loving marriage in both difficult and joyful times.
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.03.18 - 05:14PM Title: Breathe
Beautifully done! Ginny's emotions were so raw and confused - I loved how what she needed was Harry to let her fall apart. Your story made me cry and laugh at the end - the best kind of story!!
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.03.18 - 08:27AM Title: Breathe
That was a great little story. A little sad at first but with a wonderfully happy ending.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.03.17 - 08:38PM Title: Breathe
Well done story with a difficult subject! Glad they recovered and produced James Sirius! Bravo for this one! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.03.17 - 03:40PM Title: Breathe
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.03.17 - 11:36AM Title: Breathe
"Opening the daughter she put it to her daughter’s lips" - I think not. Sad story but a happy ending.