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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.04.05 - 09:13PM Title: With a Whimper

Ah quick dirty and to the point...boldly didnít see that one coming...but then again either did Bellatrix....kutgw

Author's Response: I had considered sending Voldemort to Azkaban, but this was cleaner and it also brought he elves back into the story. Thank you for the review.



Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.04.05 - 02:18PM Title: With a Whimper

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Good chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, glad you liked it.



Reviewer: Trucker Signed Date: 2018.04.05 - 11:27AM Title: With a Whimper

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It's good to see this story wrapping up. Two nitpicks, though:

At one point you used "form" where you meant "from" and at another you had "trails" instead of "trials" -- mistakes I would make!

Author's Response: I caught a couple of those as I was proof reading it, but I guess I didn't get them all. Thank you for the review.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.04.05 - 07:01AM Title: With a Whimper

Great to see another update.
To be honest, I haven't read it yet. I've been planning for a while now, that I wanted to re-read the whole story once it's completed. May I ask how many chapters are (probably) still waiting for us? It feels like there are not many anymore.

Author's Response: There are two more chapters. I am in the process of proof reading the next chapter and I have the final chapter all in my head, I just need to finish writing it.




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