Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.06.05 - 04:43PM Title: Memorial
Harry is so sappy when it comes to his love life....but then again he is in need of his happy ever after....as for Ginny she was right she would have slowed him down and kicked his butt in to gear as well...glad Vic as arrive...kutgw
Reviewer: smokeylovegood Signed Date: 2018.06.04 - 07:54PM Title: Memorial
You did a nice job of allowing each character to show through in the emotion of the day, while also allowing them to begin to heal. Even Draco was a bit amusing and human.
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.06.03 - 07:23PM Title: Memorial
This was very well written, plumbing depths of emotion from across the full spectrum. I loved the way you opened, describing the beautiful, glorious day in sweeping tones, followed by the simple, “Ginny hated it.” Perfect. The memorial service was handled with a deft touch, then you switched gears for the new arrival, where once again you provided a great counterpoint, with Hermione’s shocked, slightly judgmental interruption about Muggles using hospitals for labor and delivery! Excellent touch of snark, if that’s still a word! LOL !
Reviewer: mdauben Signed Date: 2018.06.03 - 07:19PM Title: Memorial
A sad but very good chapter this time. Not sure I agree with McGonagall, after all Crabb would not have ended up in Azkaban. After all, he was killed while trying to murder Harry, Hermione, and Ron.
Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2018.06.01 - 07:40PM Title: Memorial
Oh, the tears! I love it, but I'm kind of mad at you for making me cry! :)
Reviewer: potterfan2008 Signed Date: 2018.06.01 - 06:46PM Title: Memorial
First, congrats on your son!! That's great. Second, congrats on the Silver Trinket - well deserved!! A great chapter!! Harry's speech was amazing - very unexpected, but I can see him wanting to help everyone. Minerva was awesome - great way to start the day. I did have to laugh at Malfoy's comment about not eating children. It must be hard to Harry to reconcile the fact that his beloved godson is related to Malfoy. I imagine Hermione was freaking out imagining trying a home birth. She certainly seemed out of her depth, but Molly was in her element. A new baby was just what the day needed. I'm glad Harry and Ginny were able to spend some time together.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.01 - 06:31PM Title: Memorial
This was a marvelous chapter! The memorial ceremony was very moving and the name changes on the monument were especially poignant! Surprised the Malfools were there! Enjoyed the arrival of the newest Weasley and all the action at Shell Cottage! Quite a day for our heroes! This one sure touched my heart thru out! Congrats on your son's graduation! I'm writing this while I'm in Houston, TX to attend my niece's high school graduation! Accomplishments to be proud of for sure! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.06.01 - 02:37PM Title: Memorial
Awwwwwwww. As googd as the royal family wedding
Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2018.06.01 - 01:30PM Title: Memorial
Excellent job with the speeches! I particularly liked Kingsley's comments about the DA --without calling them the "DA".....made me think of the students from the Parkland, Florida school shooting and their efforts to oppose evil. If that's what you intended then you are a genius! If you did not intend that....well, then I suppose that's what I brought to the story as a reader.
Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.06.01 - 12:56PM Title: Memorial
Congrats on your son's graduation! My oldest daughter is going to be a HS senior this fall. I'm still trying to figure out how my curly-haired baby turned into a senior. But my youngest has assured me that she'll always be my baby (I will ignore the fact that she's an 8th grader now...).
Reviewer: Dad Signed Date: 2018.06.01 - 07:24AM Title: Memorial
Good, very moving chapter with a nice ending.
Reviewer: HP18 Signed Date: 2018.06.01 - 05:20AM Title: Memorial
First congratulations on your son's graduation. I like this chapter especially what was said about Crabbe. I think it also shows good faith to the death eater families that they are moving forward.