Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.06.15 - 06:38AM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
In response to your reply to my review of this chapter: EXACTLY! That’s why I took the hole JKR left open and, in my worldview, allowed them the choice to stay together while each did what he or she had to do. When you can Apparate, why worry with a Long Distance Relationship? Arthur lived in Devon while working at the Ministry in London. Molly’s desire to be a housewife in the countryside caused no conflict with Arthur’s infatuation with working with Muggles and Muggle things. This is absolutely not a criticism with your decisions or the way you are handling this story. Your work is, as always, beautiful and highly impressive. You’ve given us a good look into what most writers perceive the year had to look like ontologically. It makes sense!
Reviewer: Mysteryj04 Signed Date: 2018.06.12 - 07:42PM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
One of the best fanfictions I have read
Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.06.11 - 04:31PM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
Ah Ginny wishing your life away is never good, but then again with all that has happen in the past, your now ready to start your future...kutgw
Reviewer: TomBombadil Signed Date: 2018.06.11 - 03:07AM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
Ah, it's good to see our favorite badass witch back home with our favorite badass wizard! Nice job taking us through this year spent predominantly apart, touching on enough issues to give us a thorough explanation of the difficulties Harry and Ginny and Ron and Hermione would have endured as a result of the decision to spend the academic year apart. This is something that always struck me as odd in the canon, both written and spoken directly by JKR, as it seemed implausible that Harry and Ginny would have chosen another year of separation, especially given a situation in which they had just concluded a terribly painful year apart! Maybe it could have seemed tolerable for Ron and Hermione, given the relative newness of their official "togetherness" but, Holy Cow! After skirting around this issue for so long, wouldn't they have been sick of their separate living accommodations?
Reviewer: MichiganMuggle Signed Date: 2018.06.08 - 08:45PM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
Well, that escalated quickly! When you said this story wouldn't go into Ginny's Harpies days, I wasn't sure how you would wrap things up before her training, but almost all the loose ends are tied up now. Just to capture that rascal Yaxley.
Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.06.08 - 07:28PM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
Terrific chapter! Full of action and our girls finish school! Glad Harry is OK! No surprise that Deathknibblers Yaxley and Dolohov are involved in the scheme! Obvious reason would be to turn Magicals against Muggles by making it look like Muggles are attacking Magicals! Glad they got to the bottom of Aggie's murder! Nice to see the girls back with their men! Sneaky cliffhanger at the end forgetting to tell us who Harry and Owen nailed trying to take out Repo! Can't wait to see if there is a mole in the ministry and what happens next in this
Reviewer: PikkuNika Signed Date: 2018.06.08 - 11:31AM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
Loved this, especially the part about rinding the boats back the final time! I don't care whether it was published on Pottermore or whether it was your own idea, you wrote it beautifully and it brought me back to my last day of school. We also don't have a big ceremony, but we had a party and I remember feelings what you captured so well.
Reviewer: ngayonatkailanman Signed Date: 2018.06.07 - 11:11PM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
Excellent characterisation. Very nostalgic towards the end. Great job.
Reviewer: rbrt_emmer Signed Date: 2018.06.07 - 10:42PM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
A great chapter! I was going to commend you on the boats for the 7th years until I read your notes. Where is that on pottermore? That's awesome!
Reviewer: indywriter Signed Date: 2018.06.07 - 09:03PM Title: Schemers and Dreamers
Lovely, as always. I'm curious as to who Owen and Harry caught in addition to Heatherton, but I assume it wasn't a key player. I can't wait to see if all roads lead to Yaxley, or if there are moles in the ministry still.