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Reviewer: skiutahnum1 Signed Date: 2018.07.14 - 04:04PM Title: Unexpected Proposals

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Reviewer: Prongs I Signed Date: 2018.07.10 - 03:27AM Title: Unexpected Proposals

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Interesting, Ginny has also been a victim of Umbridge. To be honest, I've always wondered why Harry thought he was the only victim of Umbridge's blood quill. I'm curious what the two of them are planning, and when Dean is going to interfere again.
Great chapter!

Author's Response: I agree, Harry seems to believe he's the only one who has suffered from the black quill, but in OotP we know that Lee Jordan was also a victim, so I assumed that she used the quill with many students. Harry was very focused on himself during OotP and it's possible that he didn't realize others were affected due to his isolation (both from being publicly ostracized and his own tendency to brood).



Reviewer: Aurorofthelight Signed Date: 2018.07.09 - 04:19PM Title: Unexpected Proposals

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Loving this so far! Can't wait to see what they come up with for Umbitch! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I think Ginny's ability to pull Harry out of his dark thoughts and help him take action is one of the reasons they work as a couple. I was thinking of the chocolate in the library scene (which occurs after Valentine's Day in OotP) and their shared dislike for Umbridge when I came up with this idea. Harry is sad that he'd been kicked off the Quidditch team and is being silenced by Umbridge, and Ginny shows him how he can change his perspective and regain some agency.



Reviewer: Gin110881 Signed Date: 2018.07.09 - 07:17AM Title: Unexpected Proposals

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Great continuation of the story.
I'd bet we'll see Dean again in this story. Since Ginny didn't decline Dean advances, although Harry asked her to go flying with him that night, I suspect Dean is also something Ginny's heart desires. I'd have liked to read this part of the conversation from Ginny's POV, lol.

Author's Response: I wanted to stay close to canon, which is why I brought in Dean. In canon, Ginny will likely be dating him within the next 3-4 months, so I wanted to show some attraction there. I didn't create a version from Ginny's POV, but I would imagine that she's completely surprised and grudgingly flattered by Dean's advances. She offers him the pumpkin juice to find out whether he's under the influence of the potion, and I would expect that she was relieved to find out that she is not his true love.




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