Reviewer: hrhobo Anonymous Date: 2004.08.22 - 04:02PM Title: Percy Paid Attention
aww. Poor Percy. And poor Ginny! Although this was shorter than the others, it was still good. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: rach Anonymous Date: 2004.08.22 - 09:42AM Title: Percy Paid Attention
that was really good!! this is one of the best and most original stories ive ever come across and i love it! i was super excited to see you updated! im hoping for a speedy update with the twins' chapter, but i'll wait patiently if i have to..this is great! keep it up!
Reviewer: Ginger Snap Signed Date: 2004.08.22 - 02:28AM Title: Percy Paid Attention
I absolutely adore this story! I love the rich background you are giving Ginny and the reast of the Weasleys. I know you had some misgivings about this chapter, but you pulled it off magnificently. One of the things that I love about JKR's writing is that things are not all black and white, good and evil. There are shades of grey, and you really showed Percy's shades of grey here. Well done!
Reviewer: sylvia Anonymous Date: 2004.08.22 - 02:11AM Title: Percy Paid Attention
I, um, cried at the last line there. I adore Percy and so many authors and fans are so harsh on him. You didn't try to explain away his past actions, but you didn't glaze over them with an overly partisan air either. Major applause for writing an after-"That's nice" scene that fit seamlessly with canon. Your interpretation of Percy and Ginny's relationship works beautifully because it's not overdone; it's completely believable. You tied them together with what I think they would be tied together by-what was expressed in that last part. Percy would understand. That doesn't mean he wouldn't still be pompous Percy, but he would understand, which is just how you wrote it. Your grasp of the characters, especially the Weasleys, is astounding. Sorry for the rambling; I'm quite blown away!
Reviewer: XiaoXiao Anonymous Date: 2004.08.22 - 01:13AM Title: Percy Paid Attention
So sad. I can totally see Ginny depending on Percy when she was smaller to defend her from the twins. I can understand her feelings about his betrayal, too. Perfect & tragic.
Reviewer: Your Luvga :) Anonymous Date: 2004.08.22 - 12:15AM Title: Percy Paid Attention
I love Percy now. Seriously. I always had the impression that Ginny was the one Weasley kid who could stand Percy, and that he was the only one to notice how sick she seemed to be in CoS. He was the only one of her brothers to make her take a Pepperup Potion. I thought that was so sweet, and this kinda ties in with the concept that he watches over Ginny. I am almost now as disappointed in him as Ginny must be. I think that his betrayal hit her the hardest. Oh I am sad now.
Reviewer: Calliope Signed Date: 2004.08.22 - 12:04AM Title: Percy Paid Attention
I really like this depiction of Percy. I'm not exactly sure if I see him doing hair...but the attention deal was spot-on. I think every little girl has played the attention game and had it spoiled by a brother or sister or parent or friend like that. Keep on truckin' ::nods::