Reviewer: Dumbledore Anonymous Date: 2007.02.05 - 09:49AM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
Great chapter. I loved the heart-to-hear.
Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2006.04.23 - 07:34PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
"Whatís the deal with you and Harry?"
Reviewer: Delani Anonymous Date: 2006.03.26 - 09:32PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
...Okay, hold oooon, I gotta go find all my favorite quotes. there are a lot this time...
"I began to cry...partly because I was deeply upset, but I don't think there would have been tears if it weren't for the bloody lights." Of Course, George. I believe you. lol
"I love you, you miserable jerk" Put like a true Weasley
" 'I love you'...just because I do. It wasn't to prove a point or to make up for something I'd said or to explain something I'd done, it was just because I do."
That was one of the most sincere, Weasley, and best lines I've ever read. Maybe so just because it's so sincere and so Weasley, because I really do like Weasleys and sincerity. and sincere Weasleys...:)
Oh and the dream sequence. oi! It made me sick and scared and I kinda laughed too. It's a testimony to your humor/writing ( and that I really am a whack-job, lol).
And these words are in no way tainted by your enthusiastic reply, nor am I so pleased to hear that from you, and was not so inspired whatsoever to write a great review due to your words. nope, no siree...could not have liked that reply any less..;)
Reviewer: raiining Anonymous Date: 2005.12.07 - 06:51PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
Oh LIKED it! very very good. I'm tempted to say best one yet but that would be dangerous, with you.
really enjoyed "Her mouth hung open, "But I hate him! He hates me!"
I shook my head, "Unless "hate' means "is totally and completely whipped for'..."
Reviewer: NoelleWeasley Signed Date: 2005.11.22 - 04:31PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
This story is so beautiful...i hope you do continue with it soon! I very rarely read W.I.P. (i'm too impatient!) so you should take the fact that i keep up with yours as a compliment of the highest order (;
anyway. *begs for another chapter*
Reviewer: kjpzak Signed Date: 2005.10.20 - 05:20PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
Excellent! I like how you've woven canon into the story and yet kept it going as the original tale. The angst at the end was so real, too. I've always believed the twins had hidden depths in them, and of course, they would keep an eye out for their sister! Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: emily Anonymous Date: 2005.10.19 - 04:19PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
AWESOME! I'm so glad you've continued.. I got scared for a moment.
Reviewer: rain_1505 Anonymous Date: 2005.10.18 - 10:45PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
I just found this story a few days ago and I just love the writing style and the way you've portrayed the Weasley family. Thanks for the great read and all the laughs I had in reading Ron's chapter. rain1505
Reviewer: cre8v Anonymous Date: 2005.10.18 - 07:08PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
Did anybody else love this side of Fred and George? I think the last two chapters were a nice change to the regular twins. Keep up the story and don't let it down!!
Reviewer: snuffles007 Signed Date: 2005.10.17 - 11:52PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
I've just come back to this story after loosing it in the piles and piles of others that I am trying to keep up with and I'm really happy I did. Not many stories can get me to cry, but you did it. Keep the updates coming!
Reviewer: Carolien Anonymous Date: 2005.10.17 - 10:18AM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
I'm always waiting impatiently for an update on this story and I love it! This one especially, because the first time you did George, you didn't really show his character like you did with the other brothers. In this one he is a whole person on his own and I liked it! Thank you for this story and I hope many more updates will follow!
Reviewer: sarah Anonymous Date: 2005.10.15 - 10:51PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
Hey, I just started reading your story. I think it's absolutely fantastic and I've cried at least 6 times. There's such good character development and I just love all of the stories. Please keep writing!
Reviewer: Jessie Anonymous Date: 2005.10.15 - 06:34PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
I'm glad you posted a new part! it was really good, though i do feel bad for Ginny because i do sooo want her to be with harry...the george/ginny relationship was really cute and i cannot wait for the next part...ron? hmm, hope things get better! Great part!
Reviewer: Lauragj89 Anonymous Date: 2005.10.14 - 08:20PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
Finally! An update! I really liked this chapter, especially for the nice little plot twist about Voldemort's intentions with Ginny and the conversation about Ginny's prospects (lol). It's great how you manage to insert an interesting plot into a story that consists of a series of -what shall I call them- short narrations or installments that could very well be published individually. However, the effect they create altogether is wonderful, and the best thing about them is how one can trace the development of a character throughout the chapters. Keep it up and get those updates going!
Reviewer: May Signed Date: 2005.10.14 - 07:46PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
wow, the wait was long but soooo wroth it !!!! i am in awe with every update. all your chapters flow so perfectly and yet could easily be great one-shots. i hope you know that this story is amazing and that you take pity on us and update soon. the bit with george's nightmare was brilliant. you really pull your reader into the story. i could go on and on but i don't think i would ever finish :) please update soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous Date: 2005.10.14 - 01:33PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
Great, great, great! I really should start to think about finding some synonyms for "great' if you're going to continue to write this good-
I'm listening to Bright Eyes, and I'm still wondering about your name (if you don't know what I mean, read my other review, ch. 11).
*wishing really hard that I had an older brother*
Reviewer: Just Me Anonymous Date: 2005.10.14 - 01:11PM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
Amazing, as always. This story goes so very in dept in the characters personalities and feelings, it's unbelievable.
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: bridget Anonymous Date: 2005.10.14 - 11:53AM Title: The Ugly Duckling Manifesto
very good, is what i think, VERY good.