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Reviewer: potternut190 Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 05:23PM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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Great! I look forward to the next chaper.

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you enjoy it. I just noticed that I finally lost my 5-star rating, so I hope I can improve it enough to bring that back up.



Reviewer: musicsteph Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 05:21PM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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YEAH---- you started a new story. I was addicted to your other stories! Good start to this one! Look forward to more

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy it.



Reviewer: ander Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 03:18PM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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I read your Curse / Power stories more than a year ago, but I've liked them a lot. This story seems on the right track as well... I enjoyed Harry's interaction with Petunia, and his thoughts... You're one of the best at describing how he thinks. The part with Ron at the end was very, very sweet. Keep it up, great work! Ander

Author's Response: Thanks! A lot of people seem to like the Harry and Ron scene at the end. I'm glad. I love the friendship dynamic between the two.



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 11:45AM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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An interesting start, I look forward to seeing where you take this. It will be interesting to see how this situation with Dudley will play out. I must say I liked Ron's conversation with Harry at the end too. I'm glad to see you're writing again too. I tend to avoid Post HBP fics, but being one of my favourite fanfic authors, your name caught my attention, so this will now be among the few such that I actually follow. :-)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I hope I can live up to that praise, lol. Thanks for taking the time to review.



Reviewer: annascott Signed Date: 2006.02.26 - 10:48AM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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Woohoo! Another fic from the fabulous Melindaleo!!! I'm so excited. Interesting plot line with Dudley being a wizard. I also enjoyed Harry's musings on his relationship with Ginny, and Ron's comments were perfect. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've still got all five stars going out there, so that's good, lol. I hope I can keep you all satisfied.



Reviewer: mageia Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 09:23AM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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Thats great.. Officially the first fan fictiıon Ron says ok for harry and ginny breaking up. hahah.. Thanks for it.. and.. when will u update, ha?

Author's Response: Thanks! I think Ron will want GInny left behind, actually. He's a bit overprotective that way, and I think he's also very loyal to Harry.



Reviewer: PhoenixAeternum Anonymous Date: 2006.02.26 - 02:30AM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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Ah, the return of the goddess--- and with a bang! I must say that I am truly terrified to see what you will do with a Post-HBP fic, considering your angst-ridden tendencies. Your last multi-chapter efforts were angsty enough, but with the heartbreak that accompanies the ending of HBP, I shudder to think what you'll make us go through. Regardless of that, you're one of the best authors in fandom, so I will play the part of the dog who's kicked by his master, but keeps coming back for a pat on the head. A glutton for punishment, I suppose I am. I do hope you don't make this too angsty-- I take that back. I like angst. But when it's Harry/Ginny relationship angst... Oh, it is so very, very painful. So in the name of all things holy or otherwise, please, PLEASE don't torture us. Hard. But on to the actual review of your chapter: I like it a lot. Whilst Dudley turning out to be a wizard isn't unheard of, the way you're going about treating it is different from anything else I've read. It is also an excellent-- and very convenient-- way of getting Ron and Hermione in the house with minimal fuss on the Dursleys' part. I'm really glad you're starting another multi-chapter story, as I tend to shy away from one-shots. You are truly amongst the best in fandom, so I am very, very happy to find that you've thrust another offering upon us. I impatiently look forward to where you take this. I completely understand your unwillingness to do weekly updates. Before I started writing myself, I didn't really understand it. It didn't seem to take that much time to pound out a chapter, but then I started writing. I completely empathise with your position, I don't think people realise just how difficult it is to get such a large chapter out ever week. Hopefully your backload of already written chapters will keep us from experiencing a drought from you. Thank you for returning to us, Melinda. Sincerely, Tyler X

Author's Response: Hi Tyler. Yes, I do love angst (except romantic angst), but I honestly don't think there is as much in this story. There'll be some, of course - Chapter 6 comes to mind - but you're one to talk about angst and cliffies! There's the pot calling the kettle, lol. Yeah, the once a week thing was just too much, but I'll still keep it moving. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you'll like the rest.



Reviewer: fritz42 Signed Date: 2006.02.25 - 10:28PM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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I was left with such an empty feeling after reading HBP. There were so many things that were left unresolved--Harry breaking up with Ginny, Dumbledore dying, the Trio having to go off to find and destroy the Horcruxes. How was I going to wait 2 years until the 7th book was out? Now I don't have to wait. I have wanted you to do a post-HBP since reading your Harry Potter and the Power of Emotion and the Cursed of the Damned. I was absolutely thrilled when I noted your new story. And speaking of the new story,I loved how you made Dudley a wizard. I always enjoy the angst in your stories--no one writes Harry's thoughts and feelings like you do. I loved the exchange between Harry and Ron about Ginny. I am hoping that you don't keep our favorite couple apart for too long. Can't wait for the upcoming chapters; you have a great start to what I know will be a great story.

Author's Response: Hi! Well, she did say HBP was only the first half, so don't despair! I'm sure you'll work it all out in the end. I don't think this one will be as angsty as Curse, but you never know. However, If you do like angst - you'll love chapter 6 ;)



Reviewer: kat Anonymous Date: 2006.02.25 - 10:22PM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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yay! ive read your other stories - and was really glad to see this one! it looks GREAT - much much better than the other 7th year ones I've tried to read...I can't wait to read more - thanks!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! It's great to be back and I hope you'll continue to enjoy.



Reviewer: hpiknut Anonymous Date: 2006.02.25 - 10:18PM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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Oooh, I'm so happy to see you're doing a multi-chaptered story. I love your writing! So Dudley's a wizard? Interesting! I liked the ending of this chapter. Yay Ron! I'm curious to see when you have Harry and Ginny get back together - not too long I hope! I'm hoping Jo gets them together in book 7 by Christmastime.

Author's Response: Thanks! Yep, Dudley is a wizard and Ron rocks. LOL. I love Ron. Be patient, Ginny does appear much more quickly than I'd intended, but not qutie yet.



Reviewer: HPFAN35 Anonymous Date: 2006.02.25 - 09:46PM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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I look forward to many new chapters. Your stories are very good and can't wait for the outcome of this one. Thanks

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I hope you'll continue to enjoy.



Reviewer: Louise Anonymous Date: 2006.02.25 - 09:36PM Title: Secrets Unravelled

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This is wonderful! I loved the idea of Dudley being a wizard and how you linked it back to what Dumbledore said in HBP. There could be many meanings to that statement, and I think that this theory is really clever. I loved the interaction between Ron and Harry about Ginny, so sweet. Can't wait for more, I can see already that i am going to enjoy this story (as I did with all your others).

Author's Response: Thanks! You're my first reviewer here, and I'm so excited. I'm even happier you enjoyed it. I'm a huge fan of the friendship between Ron and Harry, so I liked that scene too.




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