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Reviewer: isabel526 Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 05:18PM Title: The Locked Room

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yeeeaaaahhhh i knew u wouldn't kill harry.
i just cant wait fot the next chapter lol.
update soooon.

Author's Response: Heh, thanks. Nope, no killing Harry from me :)



Reviewer: lylmiztalkative Anonymous Date: 2006.10.10 - 05:14PM Title: The Locked Room

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OMG! this chapter is AMAZING! it almost made me cry Harry gettin 2 meet his parents and c Lupin ,tonks, and Sirius and most of all DUMBLEDORE AGAIN!! that was so touching especially when Harry huggeg Dumbledore its lyk the one moment that jus got me...idk I've been waiting 4 Harry 2 hug dumbledore 4 the longest tym lyk all through the 5th and 6th books cuz Dumbledore was lyk the grandad he never had so yeah I'm so glad u put that in there!! I"m so excited and didt expect it 2 be posted so soon lol!! Excellent work w/ this chapter...best one so far...I say that on every chapter..lol... but I mean it!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always liked the strong relationship between Harry and DD.



Reviewer: Leiselily Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 05:03PM Title: The Locked Room

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Waaahhh! A whole handful of tissues was used to read this chapter......sniff, sniff.

Sorry, I'm too emotional to form any coherent thoughts right now. But that was a really lovely chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks much, and I'm thrilled to hear how it touched you.



Reviewer: magicalgirl13 Anonymous Date: 2006.10.10 - 04:40PM Title: The Locked Room

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yaaayayayayayayayay!!!! your making an epilouge!!! so excited. I love your stories and recomend them to alll my friends!! your stories are must reads! There like the books! If JK kills Harry of i'm offically calling your stories the new seventh book!
keep writing!!!

luvs Jordan

(magicalgirl13)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you very much. I'm glad you're enjoying it.



Reviewer: Horus Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 04:22PM Title: The Locked Room

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nice chapter...brought tears to my eyes at times

Author's Response: Good! Then it worked, thanks much.



Reviewer: Jacen Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 03:18PM Title: The Locked Room

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Reviewer: GREYWOLF Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 03:10PM Title: The Locked Room

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Well done. A sweet farewell especially with his Mum. Most people who have out of body experiences don't want to go back, but Harry has an obligation to his friends and especially to Ginny.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.



Reviewer: annkaro Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 03:09PM Title: The Locked Room

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OMG!! I love it!!
I love the way you wrote Lily and James!!
Aww!! I don't know if you'll believe me but I'm actually crying!
I'm such a crying baby!! T-T

I'm looking forvard to read the next chapters! I can't wait!!
Please don't let me die here! lol
Don't worry! just kidding! take your time!
I know you've got a life! lol

Author's Response: Heh, sorry to make you cry, but still thrilled I could do it! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.



Reviewer: lisa_lovegood Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 02:35PM Title: The Locked Room

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Will...not...cry...

waaaaaaaaa! OMG...so amzing....

That was THE best piece of fanfiction I've ever seen. I loved how you got Sirius SO in character!

"What the bloody hell is going on?" Sirius demanded, sounding very irritated. "One minute I was chatting up a delectable blonde bird with very little between her ears aside from peroxide, and the next minute Iā€™m in the middle of nowhere - alone."

LMAO!! hahaha

I loved how you had Harry nearly, but not quite, cry. So like Harry that even in situations where he should be free to finally let go of his feelings, he still holds them inside. GREAT!

I also liked the touch of Lily touching Harry's hair - it made her character seem more real - something I think Harry needed.

And also how Tonks and Lily get on - the two women keeping the Maurauders in check, I think!

YAY! Harry's going to be okay! *squee*

Even though I did have a rather, ahem, annoying lump in my throat for the greater part of this chapter - I applaud you! *cheers*

10/10
Lisa xxx

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thanks much! I'm glad you enjoyed it and that it touched you.



Reviewer: Sibling Creature Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 02:22PM Title: The Locked Room

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*smiles* I really didn't think it fair that you left it where you did last chapter, but I didn't for a moment beleive you had actually killed him... I loved this scene though, I like the thought that all his lost loved ones would be there to help him recover and return.

Author's Response: Thanks much, I'm glad you enjoyed it = and I knew there would be some longtime readers who knew, lol.



Reviewer: egyhos Anonymous Date: 2006.10.10 - 01:54PM Title: The Locked Room

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hey!! i dun know how to take this i was crying during the scene about the quidich pitch *cry* and every thing was just so perfect...
i was crying b4 i read the ch. cause something bad has happened to me and after i read it i fell on the bed and started to cry (badly) donno y though. i have actuly read it like 2 hrs ago now i just brought my self up to review on this amazing chapter review sOOn......

Author's Response: Uhm, thanks. I hope all is well now. :)



Reviewer: SueP Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 01:32PM Title: The Locked Room

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*sniff**sniff* I NEVER cry from fanfiction. EVER! *grabs a tissue* You outdid yourself on this scene. man. That was the most beautiful after-the-deed scene I've ever read. It was perfect. Honestly I wish JKR would call to borrow this chapter. I really want it to be cannon. I really want this to happen for Harry. Well done. You deserve a HUGE cookie. *takes another tissue*

Author's Response: Oh, thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thrilled I could make you cry, lol.



Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 01:12PM Title: The Locked Room

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Wow. Very well written. I never know how to take these "visits" to the afterlife. LOL But yours was very well written. I think you did such a nice job with everything. Calling Dumbledore first, unconciously. Because who else always answered all of Harry's questions after his traumas? Perfect. And then being afraid to see his parents. That is just so realistic. That emotion alone nearly brought me to tears! This wonderful young man, afraid his parents would be disappointed in him. Of course he brough Sirius and Remus/Tonks back first. There were important to him, but less scary, less risk. And I did enjoy how you handled his meeting his parents. I had tears in my eyes (ok - often streaking down my cheeks) through most of this chapter. You can really play well with our emotions. I loved the bits of humor in there too. The afterlife afraid of Ginny. "Smokin" redheads. LOL Of course the standard "I'm fine!" from Harry. Love the Mauraders happy in the afterlife! Love the hug for Dumbledore at the end. Everything was perfect!

NOW TELL US WHAT HAPPENED TO EVERYONE ELSE! We knew Harry was gonna live, but what about everyone else!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I know these scenes are standard fanfic fare, but I think they're there because we all love them. I know I do, and Harry does deserve that. Who else would Harry need but DD to explain things, right? It's tradition!



Reviewer: sockless Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 01:10PM Title: The Locked Room

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LOVE IT!!!!!!!! absolutly supurb!!!

Author's Response: Hee, thanks very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.



Reviewer: Keira Azul Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 12:55PM Title: The Locked Room

I was almost crying throughout most of this chapter - I held it back, but it was hard (I always was one to cry at the sentimental parts). I think this chapter was very important.....most people just leave it off with Harry going back and healing over time but never delving into anything. You did a really great job.

Author's Response: Hee - I always cry, too - even at Hallmark commercials, so I know how you feel. I'm glad this chapter touched you that way.



Reviewer: Keira Azul Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 12:53PM Title: The Locked Room

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I was almost crying throughout most of this chapter - I held it back, but it was hard (I always was one to cry at the sentimental parts). I think this chapter was very important.....most people just leave it off with Harry going back and healing over time but never delving into anything. You did a really great job.



Reviewer: Ima Quidditch Fan Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 11:31AM Title: The Locked Room

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Wonderful, just wonderful! I loved James' reaction to Harry the best. Each seemed so perfect, but it was the end, when he hugged Dumbledore that brought tears to my eyes. Whoa, that was emotional - well done!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks much. I'm glad you liked James. He had a special place for me this time, too. Usually it's Lily, but I liked having Harry connect with James that way.



Reviewer: notadryeeye Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 10:12AM Title: The Locked Room

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So...I woke up this morning at 6:45 to get ready so I could eat and walk to my 8:00 o'clock class from my dorm. But I turned on my computer and found you had updated....so I ended up going to class hungry and still in pajamas. I also had a hard time concentrating on my Geo test....so if I fail...I'm blaming your superb and spell-binding writing. JK...I did fine. You never cease to amaze us readers with the next chapter and this one is no different. I've read the scene where Harry finally meets his mum and dad before and it never really seemed realistic or complete to me. But you nailed this scene for me. The emotions, the guilt....the everything. What made it especially real for me is that Harry wasn't happy and extatic to see his parents...he was afraid and apprehensive, which I think is much more believable when it comes to Harry Potter. And once again you've left me craving more and left me on my knees in my dorm room, begging you to please update soon!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much, but I have to pull a Mrs. Weasley and tell you you'd better not be letting fanfiction get in the way of your stuides, and going to class on an empty stomach - particularly before a test where you need your brain energy - is unacceptable :) Thanks very much, however, and I'm glad you think it was right. This scene has been done so many times, but it just belongs there, I think.



Reviewer: UnorthodoxConvention Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 10:11AM Title: The Locked Room

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Nice. Very touching :)

Author's Response: Thanks!



Reviewer: iluvfanfics Signed Date: 2006.10.10 - 10:01AM Title: The Locked Room

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I couldn't help it, I teared up a bit. SO good.

Author's Response: Thanks! That's exactly what I was going for.




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