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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.11.08 - 06:02PM Title: Chapter 3: Going Home
Very intruiging...I wonder what Ginny is up to
Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2006.07.16 - 05:23PM Title: Chapter 3: Going Home
I like the aggressive Harry, whether she is with him, or apparently by herself. The plot has just got intriguing and I like the direction you are taking. Action already against the dementers, a dubious Harry regarding Ginny, and a determined Ginny.
Author's Response: *grins* thanks. I'm planning on keeping things interesting, shaking things up and doing in different directions as much as possible.
Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.07.16 - 12:23AM Title: Chapter 3: Going Home
Definitely interesting & well done.
I'm a little confused about one thing toward the end: if Ginny wasn't hungry, why did she sit down after she came back in? Or was the "not hungry" a reaction to realizing that Harry (may have) overheard something?
So Ginny's got something planned.... Well, at this stage of her life, I have a hard time thinking of her as a "shrinking violet" type.... :-}
Author's Response: Ginny's trying to make a point of not eating. That's why she sat down. I'm working on clearning up those little things like that.
