Reviews For Harry Potter and the Final Flame
Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.11.10 - 03:37PM Title: Chapter 11: The Road Home I've got to say this chapter had me sitting on the edge of my seat...I kept expecting whoever or whatever Harry had "sensed" to suddenly appear. Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.09.16 - 12:47AM Title: Chapter 11: The Road Home Excellent, though rather grim. I still wonder what's going on from Ginny's perspective, though. :-) Reviewer: Flibertygibet Signed Date: 2006.09.15 - 05:41PM Title: Chapter 11: The Road Home oh my gosh those poor people!! and really, what the HE** is wrong with the freaking Ministry. Don't they keep tabs on those things for cripes sake! over all great chapter, I was on the edge of my seat during the attack it was very well written dispite your lack of time to write. there were a couple of sentences that were hard to understand, (mostly misplaced words)..... “This is I, the Piccadilly line,..etc" and "... I want to poke around a bit more, to see if I there is something else to find, then I will find it.” I understood what you were trying to say but it took a couple of reads. This could also be due to uploading. just thought I would mention them. great job but remember pace your self you dont want to see this story turn sour because you rushed posts. Your loyal readers will understand and anybody who doesnt can bite it! | |||||||
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