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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2011.09.03 - 09:40PM Title: Chapter 17: Slytherin's Mark

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.11.11 - 04:09PM Title: Chapter 17: Slytherin's Mark

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Its getting very exciting...but I'm glad Remus sorted Harry out. He isn't very good at letting sitting back and letting others do their jobs. I understand how frustrating it must be for him...but he know how important it is that he is around to carry out that final job.



Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2008.02.26 - 01:44AM Title: Chapter 17: Slytherin's Mark

OK, I finally got a couple more chapters read.

In this part of the fic, Harry, Ron, and Hermione return to Hogwarts to continue the search for those elusive Horcruxes. Yes, it figured that one of them would be hiding there! Even before JKR released DH, most fic writers speculated that there'd be a Hogwarts Horcrux, and yours is no exception.

What makes your idea interesting is that Harry must search the Slytherin dungeons. As you point out, he once goes down there to find the Chamber, and now he makes his return. It's notable that Riddle would have hidden a Horcrux in Slytherin -- but it's not the Slytherin Horcrux (since that one's already been found). I enjoy the parallel between Salazar and Voldemort and how the latter wants to emulate, yet not imitate, the former.

And the Ginny/Nott mystery continues! It seems as if every time we're about to learn more about where she is, Harry realizes that he's further away from the truth. Once again, I'll have to keep on reading more in order to find out where she is!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.10.25 - 08:47AM Title: Chapter 17: Slytherin's Mark

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You get most of my comments in a different way, but I figured I'd reiterate that I'm enjoying the story -- and quite looking forward to finding out what Ginny's up to ... at the appropriate time.

Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for being my beta! :-) I really want to tell everyone what Ginny's up to... so it's frustrating for me too.



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2006.10.23 - 11:29PM Title: Chapter 17: Slytherin's Mark

Now that was a good action chapter and an interesting insight into what role Ginny could be playing. I think with a little more time that Hermione was on the verge of tripping onto another horcrux clue, but for now, I can savor the vixtory over the Death Eaters at St. Mungos.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am finding that action is getting easier for me to write, actually. It has always been a struggle but now I am begining to enjoy it. The next horcrux isn't far away... as soon as I get time to write it, that is. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2006.10.23 - 11:29PM Title: Chapter 17: Slytherin's Mark

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Now that was a good action chapter and an interesting insight into what role Ginny could be playing. I think with a little more time that Hermione was on the verge of tripping onto another horcrux clue, but for now, I can savor the vixtory over the Death Eaters at St. Mungos.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am finding that action is getting easier for me to write, actually. It has always been a struggle but now I am begining to enjoy it. The next horcrux isn't far away... as soon as I get time to write it, that is. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2006.10.23 - 08:38PM Title: Chapter 17: Slytherin's Mark

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I think that Ginny is using Crookshanks to send messages to Tonks. That is why she had to take him. Great chapter by the way. Update soon.

MPF

Author's Response: hmm now there's a theory ;-) It is possible, I suppose. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: Flibertygibet Signed Date: 2006.10.23 - 03:59PM Title: Chapter 17: Slytherin's Mark

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GREAT JOB! I hope you are happy with how it turned out. I'm really impressed. You did exactly what we talked about. There were just enough hints to make us continue to be suspicious and enough information to start to putting the pieces together. I also think that its about damn time Harry started feeling ashamed of himself for acting before thinking. Even with the furiousness of the situation I caught the comment McGonagall made. That boy is so damnned headstrong that he doesnt hear half the stuff going on around him. If he's not carefull he's gonna get himself or someone else killed so I applaud Remus and his scolding. Harry deserved it and its been a long time coming.

I would like a little clarification about this sentence though.....β€œβ€œAll I am saying is that so far he has left two of his Horcruxes in the same place, because they might be discovered. Voldemort also wanted to make sure that they were significant to him and not just to Slytherin.”..... Is this an implication that Voldemort wanted his Horcruxes found or so that he could find them if they were needed? Or is the punctuation in the wrong place? I understood what Hermione was getting at but I was a little confused with this sentence.

Again, you did a great job with this chapter and I am fully on track with things. And thank you for the mention in the authors note at the beginning. I am proud to be able to offer insight and guidence to you on this so don't ever hesitate to ask.

Fliberty

Author's Response: That was a total oops... I just redid it. I had 3 versions of this chapter and, needless to say, it's amazing that that is the only mistake ;-) Thanks again for your help and yes, I am quite proud of how this chapter turned out!




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