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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2011.09.03 - 09:41PM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.11.11 - 05:36PM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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Loved the light moment with the tricyle and Ginnys spell book.

Hope this one is it!



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.11.30 - 09:09AM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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Excellent, of course (biased though I am). :-)

Interesting touch, finding Ginny's book. And it's about time the Trio figured out a way to get through all that jetsam a bit faster. :-)

Author's Response: James suggested finding something of Ginny's and I can remember doodling in my books in high school, although not usually about boys. :-)



Reviewer: IHateSnakes Signed Date: 2006.11.28 - 10:01PM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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Excellent! S.

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: Milk Signed Date: 2006.11.28 - 05:24PM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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more soon i hope. why in the world did ginny hide the book?

Author's Response: Pretty soon. The next chapter is half done and I'm hoping to finish tonight. She hid the book in the RoR bc Fred and George were teasing her about it and kept trying to steal it from her. :-)



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2006.11.28 - 01:22AM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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Somehow you managed to create enough imagery of Harry thinking of Ginny to get us to your evil cliffie. I wonder what's been happening with Ginny?


Author's Response: Ginny is going to make another entrance into the story, although not personally I'm afraid, in 2 chapters, so chapter 22. I used to call myself the queen of BS and it's nice to know I haven't lost that touch ;-)



Reviewer: wvchemteach Signed Date: 2006.11.27 - 09:27PM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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I think you captured the essence of Harry's dilema this chapter. He pushed Ginny away to keep her safe and in doing so pushed her into a situation that probably is more dangerous. Still... this is Harry... heartbroken he still battles on gamely and refuses to give up.

Nice touch with Harry's temper amplifying his spell work on the Vanishing Charms.

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought you'd appreciate the Vanishing Charms bit :-) I watched POA last night and it really brought that moment with the Dementors back, which is what I was going for, I think.



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2006.11.27 - 08:19PM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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Reviewer: Flibertygibet Signed Date: 2006.11.27 - 06:25PM Title: Chapter 20: One Old Sock

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That was a truly terrible thing to do ending it like that. :) Good chapter though. Although a lot of interesting things happened not enough really happened to be able to leave a proper review so I'll leave it at that and end with, waiting patiently for the next chapter and I'll leave a better review next time.

Fliberty :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it was just a fluff filled one. I had one goal in mind and then several people told me they wanted fluff, angst and humor so... that's what I ended up with. I'm hoping to start writing the next chapter today, as long as work isn't crazy.




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