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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2011.09.03 - 09:42PM Title: Chapter 24: Fire Storm

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.11.12 - 03:33PM Title: Chapter 24: Fire Storm

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Another action packed chapter. Very gritty. Poor Tonks sounds beyond exhausted.

My fav comment, which made me laugh and laugh was this: Hermione explained as she went into her ‘Hermione-ish’ mode of wanting to examine him as if he was a bug.



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.01.27 - 12:21AM Title: Chapter 24: Fire Storm

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Harry's and Hermione's interrogation of Tonks didn't get very far. She only partially answered the questions and then escaped. Harry needs to ponder on this and re-think his questioning of Tonks. Is she or is she not in contact with Ginny? I'm so sad about Mrs. Longbottom and how profound this loss will be on Neville. Now Harry needs to think longer and harder about what Ginny is saying to him in his head.

Author's Response: Yeah, Ginny said a lot... Harry just missed it.



Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2006.12.31 - 04:59PM Title: Chapter 24: Fire Storm

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Ah, I've finally caught up! This is a good story....can't wait till Harry and Ginny meet up again - there are a lot of questions she needs to answer!!!

One thing, if you killed Kingsley in Chapter 19 - how could he warn the order about the attack on the Longbottoms?

Author's Response: Did I seriously kill him? I have a list of the dead and he's not on it *sigh* OOPS! Okay, I'll go back and change that. Thanks for letting me know. I know you, btw :-) You're an awesome reviewer for the RPG I write for. Thanks for reiviewing here too!



Reviewer: luna72069 Signed Date: 2006.12.29 - 11:49PM Title: Chapter 24: Fire Storm

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I love your story. Cant wait for the next chapter! Oh and please get Ginny out of the Nott's house soon. I just can stand it much longer.

Author's Response: Sorry, you've got another few chapters to go. :-/ I think it will be worth the wait, though.



Reviewer: Wolfs_Scream Signed Date: 2006.12.29 - 10:15PM Title: Chapter 24: Fire Storm

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Heh; that "small nagging voice" could help provide Harry with an interesting perspective, eh? Well done.

Author's Response: If he would only listen to it... ;-)



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2006.12.29 - 03:52PM Title: Chapter 24: Fire Storm

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Another great chapter, Things are really starting to get ugly.

MPF

Author's Response: Yes they are... :-)




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