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Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2010.06.06 - 06:45PM Title: Chapter 3

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Part of me wants to be glad for Ginny that now they "are even" in their feelings for one another......but the other part of me wants to announce that loving someone isn't about being "even"......it's less safe and more risky than that.....and that is part of what makes it valuable.

Still, excellent job addressing Ginny's insecurities and years of uhrequited love.....well done!



Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2007.08.24 - 06:30PM Title: Chapter 3

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You know, you really don't need to write the epiloge to this, you just take this story, put it in "In the House" right after chapter "Let These Be Your Desires" then follow this up with "That Night Over the Moon" and then jump back into "In the House" at chapter "One Step Ahead"

One long great very well written story that has all the right pieces, the right pulls on your emotion and ends right where it should with the vows.

Excellent, just excellent



Reviewer: FieryAce Anonymous Date: 2007.07.31 - 05:34PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.04.21 - 03:32AM Title: Chapter 3

Probably not the end? I really hope not. If you want to see how your story " In The House of The Quick and The Hungry" inspired aanother author to write a brilliant one shot, read Report on Excavations HH#7 and HH#8 (Imay have the numbers wrong) . The tell they are digging on is the house your created in the last chapter of ITHOTQATH.

Again, I really hope you contine this story a bit further, unless your muse is on vacation. If this really WAS the last chapter, thanks for the lovely ride.

Darian



Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.02.21 - 01:12AM Title: Chapter 3

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ahhh...the agonies of true love. added to favs just in case that wasn't the end. See, this is the story that had me reading the rest of your stuff as well....I had to read it all before I got to this one.

Next on the menu: bachelor / bachelorette party? wedding reception, or even the proposal? Just a few off the top ideas, well after midnight, from an insomniac that reads fanfics instead of sleeping. LOL

Author's Response: Actually, the proposal is already written and posted "That Night Over The Moon," check it out. Thanks so much for all your great reviews!



Reviewer: Delani Anonymous Date: 2007.02.18 - 01:42AM Title: Chapter 3

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:)

oh honestly a colon and parenthesis don't do my smile justice...



Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2007.02.17 - 09:05PM Title: Chapter 3

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This was so sweet! Good work. I remember from the last chapter of "house and the quick and the hungry" that Ron said Harry got a tatoo, I wondered how that happened. Write more when you can and good luck with your novel. You're a great writer.



Reviewer: Dumbledore Anonymous Date: 2007.02.16 - 07:08AM Title: Chapter 3

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Very cute. I do love all your stories. Even if you left it like this, it would still be great.



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.02.15 - 10:27PM Title: Chapter 3

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Nice one...Probably Not the End???
So you're writing a novel? Good on ya. That takes a lot of time and talent. Talent you have...so let us know when you're published so we can buy your first novel.



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.02.15 - 05:18PM Title: Chapter 3

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I loved this chapter. Loved that Harry didn't know that the drago was Ginny's patronus and only later did he realize how much that made Dean suffer. Loved the agony that Harry had in not being able to tell Dean whether or not he was still Ginny's boyfriend. Loved the idea of a fire flaming dragon when Harry was aroused. And loved it when they finally just got it right at the end.




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