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Reviewer: gejufan Signed Date: 2008.07.08 - 11:39AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

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haa i like the idea of the story but found the writing to be lacking the characters just didn't sound like themselves, especially draco.

Author's Response: well, what do we know about the Malfoy's life when they are alone and far from the rest of the world? and remember that, in DH, Draco Malfoy was more subdued when he was being asked if the Trio was really the Trio than at school, which could merit to how he changes sides.



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2008.04.20 - 05:32AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

update update update update.................................. ..................................



Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.04.10 - 05:41PM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

very nice you have talent all around though i do say i think your other story is were your masterpiece lays but while I wait nothing wrong with reading this wonderful story



Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2008.03.31 - 04:53PM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

i love it!!



Reviewer: griffindorechicky101 Signed Date: 2008.03.31 - 04:51PM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

nice job i love it



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.07 - 08:51PM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

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what was that! oh come on!

CodeRomance

Author's Response: wait for next chapter



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.11.16 - 08:32AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

dude arent u taking a bit mor time to post ur next chap
its getting frustating again and again to se it hasnt updated yet

Author's Response: I'm sorry for the HUGE delay in updating next chapter, but circumstances beyond my control stopped me from writing this fanfiction. However, I think that this weekend I'll be able to send my beta the chapter and it should be up by Wednesday or Friday, depending on how much time my beta takes on doing her job.



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 09:26AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

for that heir thimg how come voldy wants to take care of someone
it kinda rubs off the evil sychopath a litle (snigger) dont u think
voldy wanting to take care of someone ........................................ .....


Author's Response: It'll be explained in the next chapter



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 09:21AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

dude when are the rest of the updates commin through ?
dont take too long plz
the charm of the story fades if kept incomplete for long
update quickly na getting frustrated here

Author's Response: sorry, is just that I'm hitting a block for chapter 19. I'll work on it, though.



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.09.12 - 04:50AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

srry its just that i only have 5mins free in a day so i am in a bit of hurry and i dont think its necessaryto be grammaticaly correct when u can convey the message
i thought abou6t writing my own fanfic but i cant get beyond a few lines i v got a writers block somehow i dont know,
i mean i got the outline fr the best story (it ll beat the crap out of other fan fics {no offense})its just that i cant find the words to put them down in paper
if u can help me it would be appreciatede

Author's Response: well, you could try to start writing a bit of the story at first, but watching about what you are writing about. For example, if your story is an AU of Harry's childhood, you could try to put something that deals with his infancy, or something even more backwards in time (Lily telling James and/or the Marauders that she is pregnant, or Dumbledore hearing the Prophecy). If you wish to do so, you could try to send me the outline of the story, and I could tell you a few things you could put.



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.09.07 - 07:03AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

hey dude i got an interesting thing for ya
i was researching egyptian mythology and i kinda stubbled onto the shield of osirisa
it it remoured to be the shield of the gods and its myth says that when human wizards got too cocky and dicided to bring the dead back to life thru various dark magic the god osirid really got mad and he kinda created a shield that doesnt allow the living to cross the realm to go to the dead to bring them back
sooooooo
using this concept u can use it as an spell the shield of osirisa to block the avada kedavra curse
but as i researched there are a few drawbacks for this spell
it uses positive life enrgy to fuel the apell
no negative thought must come while casting the spell kinda like the patronus(makes using the corpeal patronus a requirement )
after using the spell the users entire enrgy is used and he nearly faints only very powerfull can cast5 more than 2 that too with a lot of difficulty
it cou7ld make the entire story interesting u
just giving u tips
u like it email me
ill give u more

Author's Response: although it sounds really interesting, I do not plan to put some kind of shield that stops the avada kedavra completely (do you remember what Harry was able to use to stop the Cruciatus? It can be used for the AK too!), and, anyway, the final battle is already planned, so I don't plan to use your idea. Maybe you could write a fanfiction and include it? P.S: please, do TRY to correct the grammar mistakes! I'm Spanish and I can write better than that! (No offence)



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.08.13 - 02:12AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

no its just that i get some thing creative
u dont like it its ok
i give u ideas u take what u like
rest to the dump
well cant w8 for the 18 chapter soooo
when are the 19 and20 commin up

Author's Response: I'm waiting for my beta to send the chapter back, so don't worry



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.08.11 - 04:13AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

dude yaar is a word in hindi
hi im frm india
nice to read ur fanfics u know i was gonna write something but just can go ahead beyond few words
so i guess i kinda understand u takin time
i really have some good ideas soo ill help u out if i cant write better u that me
u knoe for the army u could put together goblins centures elves maybe some invented creatures for healing
and heres a good idea u can make an opposite of the dark mark u know the skull thingy in the sky with ugly snake as its tongue u can put a griphhin as the symbol of hope for harry's army u knoe light comes from the symbol
the dark mark fades away on its appearance kinda things
ur story really is getting tooo mushy just perk the story a bit
anyways i really like what i read frm u soo i guess u should keep it up
YAAR MEANS FRIEND IN HINDI
check it out man

Author's Response: OK, thanks for the info I'm Spanish, so I had no idea that yaar means friend in hindi you could still try to write 'know' instead of 'knoe', it's rather strange to see so many 'knoe's. I had planned the idea of the light army a lot of time ago, but I never thought of Harry inventing a mark like the Dark Mark. I like that you like my story. Chapter 18 will be up soon, so don't worry.



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.08.10 - 06:11AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

really duse u should get your updates fast yaar
make ur story a bit long
u knoe traditionally the fight bt voldy and harry should be at the end of the 7th year u know
its a sorta unspoken agreement i guess
just make the story story revolve a bit more our fav couple and if you want to a add a bit plot then goo ahead a bit better for us
plz dont delay the updates yaaar it gets booooooring
havc all your acadimic stuff over mine exams are starting so its gets difficul tro hang about here
and finally DO NOT GO AND MAKE GINNY PREGNANT
that is one of the most stupid things fanfic writers ever write dude its disgusting if u thing in a way and a lot of embarrassing toooooo
make them intimate but dont make harrykins a father befor he wants to u knoe u get mu drift
andeally likedthis another fanfic from drakir its about the dark wars
u knoe u should read that and get an general idea about how harry handles the army of goood creature gets the story an extra twist
plz update fast
u really are a good writer soooo dont muck it up

Author's Response: to the first thing, I'm doing it as fast as I can, but sometimes I have writer's block, and my beta usually takes her time to send the chapter back. the story is going to be very long (18 chapters just to arrive to Halloween!!), and I have the sequel prepared. Voldy vs. Harry in three rounds will be in year 6. Ginny won't be pregnant until Ginny & Harry are married. the army of good creatures will be updated (no pun intended) with some sorts of other beings. thanks a lot for your trust. P.S: could you try to write better? I have problems to understand what are you saying ('yaar' sounds more like Chewacca's roar than an English word, mind you)



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.07.21 - 04:11AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

welll since dh realeases today y dont u read it and some new ideas from old rowling herself
although u could try to make it less complicated
make the story like revolve around ginny and harry mostly the
u couls try the idea of harry raising his own army of good creatures to fight the bad u get my idea
elves centures goblins some new creatures
make harries powers more refined
i wouls recommend u read the potter series really well again and see what type ofv language grammer is used in the book and u add a little of your own romantic senes bt harry and ginny
plz pm if u want any help id be happy to help u out

Author's Response: I have just read DH and I really liked it. As you have seen the story really revolves around Ginny and Harry, and the idea of Harry raising his own army was something I had been thinking of for a few weeks. Harry will be able to control his elementals and all his Animagus forms in the next chapters, as well as his friends.



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.07.07 - 07:26AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

nice to hear that just dont take posting ur chapter sooooo long
the suspence actualy kills u know

Author's Response: sorry about that. but don't worry, chapter 18 is still going on. the problem it's that it is rather hard to make ideas about how to make the time pass in the story. I have placed some milestones (I think it is written that way) in my mind for the story, but the time between said milestones is difficult to fill. If you (or someone else) gave me some ideas, I would be grateful.



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.06.30 - 10:43AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

wats taking u soooooooooo long maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan the 7th book is about to be released
plz donmt abandon this fic its really nice


Author's Response: I'm VERY busy right now, since I am having exams till July 6th. But do not worry, I don't plan to abandon this fic, even after 'Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows' is released (I already have planned the outline of Harry's seventh year, and I even have two more stories in the boxes (one story which will be rewritten with permission of its original author, other which is completely mine).



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.06.26 - 07:31AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

dont worry about the writers block
take ur time just give it ur best and plz make the final scene or battle with volsemont exiting action suspence and tough for harry
make it an tremendously tough fight for harry
that would give it an extra edge
thanks for writing anyway u really write nice keep it u take the relationship between harry and ginnny to another level make ginny more strong
keep the good work up

Author's Response: thank you!



Reviewer: krpton Signed Date: 2007.06.23 - 04:58AM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

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really good piece of work
good innovation and every thing but
u r makin things really complicated u know
with some many new powers harry has
u will leave something behind and concentrate on one thing alone don't do that
keep up the good work i still like it do justice to every power make every thing come useful
dont make it too easy for harry voldemont must be an equal match for harry the battle between them should be tough and hard not too easy6

Author's Response: It is very difficult to write the story (right now, I am under a combination of writer's block and impossibility of working due to University tests), but I am doing my best in trying to include everything. About Voldemort, I have already planned the Final Battle, everything that is going to happen in it and the last thing that happens.



Reviewer: johnapple Signed Date: 2006.12.17 - 12:42PM Title: Chapter 1: I'd Rather Be A Traitor

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I can,t get this chapter on Schnoogle - there are two chapter "ones" listed in the index. Clicking on the first chapter one leads to chapter 2 which is listed as chaper one. Confusing yes.

Author's Response: I don't know what happened with that, but you'd better read the story here




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