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Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.04.12 - 05:06PM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat

hmm well i dismissed time as one as it being to bland for you but you did put a twist on it though



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.08 - 03:16PM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat

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so who is the musical person! i mean duhh on Draco but who is the girl! is daphne? or someone else? ooooh!

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Reviewer: Little Miss SciFi Anonymous Date: 2007.01.29 - 02:33PM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat

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Excellent chapter! Looking forwarder to seeing the next one!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter!



Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2007.01.29 - 11:46AM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat

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OK, I can see you putting time and space together as 1, but I still like my guess of the two of them. :-) What, you're putting your writing on hold for something a small as exams? What are you thinking? ;-)

Seriuosly, I like that you've brought Moody back. It will be interesting to see what you do with Martin. I also liked Harry joke on Ron about him kissing Harry's sister and making Ron jump. Haha. Anyways, keep up the good work, post soon, and all the other encouragement... :-)

Author's Response: let's see if you guess element number 6 (clue: remember the Prophecy). What do you believe I am thinking about? Exams, of course XD. Thanks for your support in my story. P.D: Your story "Harry Potter and Choices" is very good.



Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2007.01.29 - 10:24AM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat

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Excellent chapter! Update as soon as you can, please.

Author's Response: i'll try that, but that's not going to happen in the next two or three weeks



Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2007.01.29 - 05:51AM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat

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You need to look over your spelling - it should be deduce, for instance, rather than "deduct", and so on - and I've always disliked the Super!Harry concept (really - five animagus forms, universal elemental, and all that?) but otherwise the writing was pretty fair.

Author's Response: oops! sorry for that! I'll try to correct it. and for the Super!Harry concept, well, I only can say that I am sorry that you don't like it, but thanks for your review!




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