Reviews For Harry Potter and the Unexpected Visitor
Reviewer: piltad Signed Date: 2008.04.12 - 05:06PM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat hmm well i dismissed time as one as it being to bland for you but you did put a twist on it though Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.08 - 03:16PM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat so who is the musical person! i mean duhh on Draco but who is the girl! is daphne? or someone else? ooooh! Reviewer: Little Miss SciFi Anonymous Date: 2007.01.29 - 02:33PM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat Excellent chapter! Looking forwarder to seeing the next one! Reviewer: _kb_ Signed Date: 2007.01.29 - 11:46AM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat OK, I can see you putting time and space together as 1, but I still like my guess of the two of them. :-) What, you're putting your writing on hold for something a small as exams? What are you thinking? ;-) Reviewer: Xfactor Anonymous Date: 2007.01.29 - 10:24AM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat Excellent chapter! Update as soon as you can, please. Reviewer: Torak Signed Date: 2007.01.29 - 05:51AM Title: Chapter 14: A Very Interesting Chat You need to look over your spelling - it should be deduce, for instance, rather than "deduct", and so on - and I've always disliked the Super!Harry concept (really - five animagus forms, universal elemental, and all that?) but otherwise the writing was pretty fair. | |||||||
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