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Reviewer: BioHazard82 Signed Date: 2008.01.28 - 03:15PM Title: Chapter 20: I Asked You Before Anybody Else Could
Great story so far, but I had a question. Have you been reading 'Taking Control' by Fake a Smile? Cause, where as both stories have rather different stories then the other for the most part, they both also have ALOT of similar elements (like Ginny's cat, Harry being powerful and learning very fast, and a few others I have seen over the time reading this.). I still like you story, so don't think in any way I'm trying to downplay it. In that respect, keep up the good work, and update soon!
Author's Response: Of course I'm reading "Taking Control"! It's one of the best stories I've ever read! However, I never realised that it had many things in common with it! I'm working a lot on both The Unexpected Visitor and Prodigy as fast as I can, and I hope that you like both of my stories. Thank you!
Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2008.01.08 - 10:30PM Title: Chapter 20: I Asked You Before Anybody Else Could
great chapter...i loved the prank very original! please update soon!
CodeRomance
Author's Response: well, I'm glad you liked my story, and I'm even glad that you reviewed every chapter, but you could have tried to do the 20 reviews in just one of them, don't you think so?
Reviewer: Wolfric Signed Date: 2008.01.08 - 01:30PM Title: Chapter 20: I Asked You Before Anybody Else Could
Good chapter. It is good to hear from you again. Thanks for writing. W.
Reviewer: Soccer Devil22 Signed Date: 2008.01.08 - 01:01AM Title: Chapter 20: I Asked You Before Anybody Else Could
I know a good song. Not sure what language it is in... I think Swahili. I'm also not sure where you might be able to find the lyrics but the name of the song is: Dansi Na Kuimba. It's a good song. If I remember correctly, "Dansi Na Kuimba" means "Dance and Sing". So you might want to check that out. Good chapter. ~Jeff~
Author's Response: Well, in the end I just put down the songs of my choice, and there are only songs in English and Spanish. Thanks, though, for caring.
Reviewer: colpinky Signed Date: 2008.01.07 - 10:36PM Title: Chapter 20: I Asked You Before Anybody Else Could
The wait was okay because you definately get points for the broken records. That is one of the most inventive pranks that I've read yet, and incredibly appropriate too. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2008.01.07 - 09:25PM Title: Chapter 20: I Asked You Before Anybody Else Could
Great chapter! Although I thought it a little OOC that Harry would say it was ok for them to "fawn" on him and Ron abit. I loved the quidditch match, how they used muggle tactics was uber cool :]
Reviewer: johnny1701 Signed Date: 2008.01.07 - 03:16PM Title: Chapter 20: I Asked You Before Anybody Else Could
this was another great chapter and I hope you will keep up the great work
Author's Response: I'll try, mate, I'll try!
Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2008.01.07 - 10:48AM Title: Chapter 20: I Asked You Before Anybody Else Could
The prank was quite humorous.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! It was a bit difficult to think of it, especially since the differences between English and Spanish set phrases made it difficult, but fortunately, in this case, they were very similar, so there was no problem.
