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Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2008.10.10 - 01:58AM Title: Norbert The Icle Baby Dragon
Hagrid is a lovable character...his love of "misunderstood" animals and such has always put a smile on my face. Enjoyed the chapter,
Reviewer: Kingslee Signed Date: 2007.09.19 - 02:24PM Title: Norbert The Icle Baby Dragon
I enjoyed Harry being caught in his lie about Christmas. The Peeves part was funny, I loved the go fetch part especially.
Reviewer: potters_girl Signed Date: 2007.06.23 - 10:59AM Title: Norbert The Icle Baby Dragon
hey i'm really enjoying this story, and am looking forward to reading Harrys later years at Hogwarts. I like Harry's cheekiness towards Sirius, its fun to read.
Reviewer: Baby_Huey Signed Date: 2006.09.03 - 11:11PM Title: Norbert The Icle Baby Dragon
please stop using the word whilst. You use it too often and in many cases unneseisarily. You probably think that it makes iyou writing seem more sophisticated, well it does not. A lot of people think that it can be used interchangably with while, this is not true. yes they both mean the same thing but since whilst is so archaic it just not fit with most modern phrases.
Reviewer: lecook4 Signed Date: 2006.08.25 - 01:59PM Title: Norbert The Icle Baby Dragon
I guess I was so busy just getting all your chapters validated that I forgot to leave a review. I just noticed that and wanted to apologize. I really like your story and can't wait to see where you go with it. It is a great idea with lots of possible twists anytime you mess with changing time. I'm glad to see Harry has calmed down a little bit. I thought he came off a little arrogant at first when he was at the Burrow and how he treated Dumbledore, but he has become more of the regular Harry we all know. Good job with the idea and look forward to more.
Author's Response: There is a big twist commign up soon. not straight away but soon. and to me its obvious but hey im the author i know where its going :) readers dont.
Reviewer: Baby_Huey Signed Date: 2006.08.23 - 08:00PM Title: Norbert The Icle Baby Dragon
is harry ever going show that he is at least cometent with his spell work? Maybe Hermione is going to confront hime about holding back?
Author's Response: He will next year he wil lshow magic and 3rd year he will show how tru;ey poerful he really is
Reviewer: Old Fart Signed Date: 2006.08.23 - 06:53PM Title: Norbert The Icle Baby Dragon
I'm really enjoying your story. My only concern is that if Harry doesn't prevent Ginny from being posessed in the next year, and Ginny finds out that Harry knew what would happen, Ginny would be so angered that she would no longer like Harry. (How's that for a long sentence, Sorry.)
Author's Response: yeah defiantly long scentance. bu this is a harry and ginny story nad they will be together at the end of the story
Reviewer: Dragen Signed Date: 2006.08.22 - 09:11PM Title: Norbert The Icle Baby Dragon
I loving your story, you're keep as much as possible to the book, but with changes here and there.... the only thing I don't like is that you're making Harry's firends think that he can't do much magic. Apart for that I love it.
So Sirius is protecting the stone, if that is ture, then I feel sorry for anyone who trys to get the stone...
I just wish that Harry asks Ginny out, they both love each other, so why not ask her out already, I also think he should tell his friends some truth about him, not all the truth but some of it, they could help him with things.
Keep up the great work, and update ASAP please...
I was wondering if you've got the time, if you could read my story.
Author's Response: for thoes that read the reviews and my replies they dont get together untill third year :)
