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Reviews For Erasing The Future

Reviewer: Larry Signed Date: 2008.10.10 - 03:06AM Title: Hearing Voices

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OH Harry how can you let this happen????????????????????



Reviewer: Sakabatou Signed Date: 2007.01.23 - 06:01PM Title: Hearing Voices

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First: Great chapter:)

Second: Not too many flamers this time:)

Third: The last time I review I said you also have to think about if Harry did get rid of the diary, what will happen to Dobby? This happen for a reason, and even if Harry did destroy the diary, something else might happen, because things seem to be repeating itself other ways: like Ron and Harry receiving their detention again, where Ron will be Polishing Tom Riddle's award, so it's best to stay the corse Harry knows.

Yeah, Ginny will be Peeved off, I would be too, and so will Hermione, Neville, and Ron, and they most likely will hex him for it. I see Harry telling them his Fourth year, where Ginny will blow him off for the Yule Ball, maybe Ron will still be mad about Harry's name in the Goblet, or not if Harry stops Fake Moody from putting his name in, and will be hating Harry for what he did to his sister. As for Hermione and Neville, of course Neville will take Ginny to the Yule Ball, Hermione will most likely forgive Harry, then maybe Ron or Neville next, and then Ginny, probably at the end of Harry fifth or sixth year.

But this is not my story, I can't wait for your next chapter.

As for a review read about Harry being harsh on Sirius and trying to be a 25 year old, or however old he was, instead of being a 12 year old, he is basicilly 25, only that he's in a 12 year old body, and think Sirius likes Harry being a hard arse, he's a Marauder after all:)



Reviewer: Ginny Weasley Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 11:11PM Title: Hearing Voices

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Has Harry considered that Ginny might actually fall in love with him just for being Harry? He doesn't have to save her life to have her love him...



Reviewer: Breanie Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 08:46PM Title: Hearing Voices

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ok first of all this story is bloody brilliant! im addicted to it! and i just read all 22 chapters in one go! i love that harry still has all of the memories and that he gets to live with Sirius who was released from prison so early. i dont kno if i agree with harry's decision bout the chamber but i guess we'll have to wait and see what happens.

there is one thing that i have a problem with though

i think harry is a little too full of himself at times when hes talking to sirius hes something very rude and demanding like he forget that hes not 27 but 12. other then that the story is incredible nad im praying that u update soon!



Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 11:28AM Title: Hearing Voices

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Harry needs to tell Ginny and get it over with. She already likes him he needs to get that diary away from her as soon as possable. Because when she finds out I feel she will be more upset that he know and did not tell her. He has already made changes to the time line, this will be no different.

MPF



Reviewer: Kezzabear Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 08:22AM Title: Hearing Voices

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I love getting updates to this story!

I just love little feisty Ginny in your story. I feel like we missed out in Canon sometimes not getting to know her until OotP.

Author's Response: So do i. i think the personality of both harry and ginny fit so perfectly togther. being able to show that of earlier is great



Reviewer: Myrkul Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 07:36AM Title: Hearing Voices

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And he should has second thoughts! I think it's most stupid thing he could done. However - great chapter, as always:)




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