Reviews For Erasing The Future
Reviewer: JRP Signed Date: 2008.06.19 - 10:56AM Title: The Duelling Club Your story overall is very good. though I do have some problems with it. first of all in this time line harry and ginny would NOT be married. it just doesnt make sense because in this time line it never happened. so all of harry's problems with the loveless marriage and what not shouldnt really be a problem because if she doesnt love him they simply dont get married this time. harry is also acting very childish chosing her loving him over keeping her safe. if he really loved her it wouldnt even be a decision. I would like to say that I love that harry is Godric's heir in your story. also in your story i absolutly hate hermione. she is still that stuck up little girl she was before she had friends even tho she now has some. she really needs to begin to develop and change. also you need to get harry working on the hermione, ron thing. also i really hope that luna comes into your story sometime soon. I also hope you begin to develop a relationship between luna and neville. Reviewer: Macsr71 Signed Date: 2007.05.30 - 04:47PM Title: The Duelling Club Nice redo on canon with good changes that will give us a strong H/G much sooner - good story that could be a great story if you have someone looking this over prior to posting - do you have a beta? do you want a beta? I do some work for others and, since I like your take on this would be willing to do some work for you - drop me a line if you want Reviewer: Sakabatou Signed Date: 2007.05.30 - 06:04AM Title: The Duelling Club Really good of how you changed things up on the duel club. Harry should have done something to prevent Malfoy from casting Serpenatia, (sorry can't remember how to spell it,) so he could keep everyone off his case about being a Parselmouth. Oh, well, things happen for a reason. Good chapter. Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 05:45PM Title: The Duelling Club Good chapter. I wonder how Ron and Hermione will do with the Polyjuice. Reviewer: Wolfric Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 03:37AM Title: The Duelling Club Good Chapter. I guess we will have to wait to find out about Hermione and the Polyjuice potion. Thanks for writing. W. Reviewer: marinepotterfan Signed Date: 2007.05.24 - 11:52AM Title: The Duelling Club I think Harry should start putting in Ginnys mind that since Tom has been gone there have been no attacks and maybe he was the one who was making her do it. Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp Signed Date: 2007.05.23 - 10:32PM Title: The Duelling Club Awww the scene at the end was cute! but how will ron and hermione do raiding the slytherin common room w/out harry...hmmmmm update soon! | |||||||
|