Reviews For Erasing The Future
Reviewer: ioname2you Signed Date: 2007.09.22 - 02:17AM Title: A Trip To Diagon Alley love this story Reviewer: witowsmp Signed Date: 2007.09.15 - 02:36PM Title: A Trip To Diagon Alley Harry should've told Dumbledore about the cloaked figure after him. Reviewer: The Seeker Signed Date: 2007.09.09 - 09:16PM Title: A Trip To Diagon Alley Your Wormtail appears to be much more dangerous than he was in canon. The combination of Peter reaching out in the Floo network and the hooded figure in Diagon Alley certainly drove the point home that Harry is at risk. It will be interesting to see how you develop this with Harry, Ginny, and the others returning to Hogwarts soon. I'm wondering if you have something planned for Platform 9 3/4 or the train ride to the school. Reviewer: partypooper Signed Date: 2007.09.09 - 05:36PM Title: A Trip To Diagon Alley yayayayayayayay!!!!!!!! u updated!!!!! yahooooo!!!!! how did wormtail do the hand thing anyway??? was it like random time or wutever??? i don't get it. ah well update soon plz and love the chapter!!!! blah blah blah u know the happy stuff. gr8 chapter. Reviewer: hot48cricket Signed Date: 2007.09.09 - 02:09PM Title: A Trip To Diagon Alley Nice (short) chapter...I'm looking forward to year 3. Reviewer: Myrkul Signed Date: 2007.09.09 - 07:05AM Title: A Trip To Diagon Alley My intial reaction to Peter's escape was much like Harry's - "he's coward, no danger there" I thought. But now I see that he's really threat to Harry. Looking forward to next chapter. And stop tormenting poor Harry and Giny and let them kiss:) Reviewer: BeyondRedHorizons Signed Date: 2007.09.09 - 06:47AM Title: A Trip To Diagon Alley The brevity was a bit disappointing, especially after the relentless sweetness of the last few chapters. I was really surprised Ginny didn't react more to Pettigrew making an attempt on Harry's life; the threat of it was enough to have her in tears, previously, but she took the actual attempt rather stoically. | |||||||
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