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Reviewer: riegert8 Signed Date: 2011.09.03 - 10:10PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: pottermania Signed Date: 2009.11.01 - 07:17PM Title: Chapter 1

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I had a silly grin on my face! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.04.20 - 08:14PM Title: Chapter 1

oh i see how it is! well ok its ur story and i cant really complain cuz it was still good!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it anyway. I hate when I get to a point and I'm just 'done' with a story, but that's the way it went.



Reviewer: CodeRomance Signed Date: 2007.04.20 - 01:17PM Title: Chapter 1

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so why did you end it like that? i mean you could have continued and wrote more! well whatever great one-shot!

Author's Response: I ended it there cause I was tired of writing it ;-) Isn't that terrible?



Reviewer: Chreechree Signed Date: 2007.01.18 - 06:23AM Title: Chapter 1

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Judged for challenge

Oh you put so much in this story. I was a bit confused about Harry having to listen to R/Hrís nocturnal activities (silencing charm) but quickly assumed that this domestic and emotional Hermione was pregnant. Ron did handle it well. Iím happy to see some family concern and disapproval. She is only 16, after all. I do wonder at everyone thinking itís a good idea. While several fics do have a serious tone about them, of the ones Iíve read so far (still have several to go), this is the only one that ends on a dark note. Yes, theyíre getting married, but Ginny is just learning what Harry is still facing moments after learning her home has been destroyed. Itís bleak and honest to what they could be facing in Book 7 (love in the midst of pain and loss). That being said, you still infused it with love, humor, and an accurate sense of family. I canít say Iím surprised. While I havenít been reading your latest story (I will get around to it, I promise), you always mix the dark and the light so well. Very enjoyable read. Good luck!


Author's Response: LOL... TOTALLY forgot silencing charms... Oh my goodness, was that a blonde moment. I try to shoot for a good mixture of all things in my stories, as it could otherwise be overwhelming, so I\'m glad you liked the humor and romance... no worries about reading my next story, it\'s going SLOWLY so if you decide to read it, you probably want to read it when I\'m all done. Everyone else is ready to hit me, even though I usually update weekly.



Reviewer: Keira Azul Signed Date: 2007.01.17 - 11:32PM Title: Chapter 1

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This was a very interesting entry; it was a bit different from a lot of them - the war isn't close to over, no mention of all of the horcruxes being found....really it's the way I feel it ought to be (maybe minus a bit of morning sickness from Hermione! :) Very good job -- I wish you the best of luck in the competion, and a Happy New Year!

Author's Response: hehe... well a bit of morning sickness just spices things up, but as I wasn\'t shooting to win the challenge (and I didn\'t, thankfully) I felt like I could do whatever I wanted, rather than looking to please a judge. Still, I\'m glad you thought it was different (I didn\'t read any of the others). Different is a compliment for me. :-D



Reviewer: Yunchao Signed Date: 2007.01.14 - 11:59AM Title: Chapter 1

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Great story, quite adventurous *wink*! It was very discriptive and it had a lot of plot for a relatively short story so I enjoyed it a lot. Good Job!

Yunchao

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing!



Reviewer: GINNY__POTTER258 Signed Date: 2007.01.13 - 02:25PM Title: Chapter 1

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very cute but i think harry would have tried to give mr&mrs weasley some money for the burrow...i would have been great if you had included the talks with the weasley brothers so i take it that harry's about to tell her the prophercy right? i think so anyway.... great story! : )

Author's Response: If I\'d continued the story on, he probably would have... not that I see them accepting it, though :-) It got to the point, though, where it was getting a bit long so I just cut it off... that and my muse ran off. But I\'m glad you liked it anyway, and thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: Jim McGuffin Signed Date: 2007.01.10 - 11:52PM Title: Chapter 1

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Judged for competition.

This is an enjoyable story. Fred/George are really up to their usual antics in this fic, beginning with locking Harry/Ginny in the room. And it works -- Ginny forgives Harry and they're back to snogging under the mistletoe.

All the challenge writers used that line about what the ruby means, but you're the first to have it mean that one's too cheap to buy a diamond! LOL! Ironically, I recently read that rubies are actually rarer than diamonds, contrary to what one might think.

The title of this fic reminds me of Dobby's decorating the Room of Requirement with the banner "Very Harry Christmas." But in this fic, you mean "hairy" as in Ginny's hair -- LOL! Whatever sort of prank the twins were trying to pull, obviously backfired.

It's interesting how you mention Ron/Hermione's relationship, as well as the ending, in which H/G are together but Harry tells Ginny about the Horcruxes. One could almost fit this story into a full seventh year fic.

Overall, great job and good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate the well thought out review, it\'s nice to hear what someone thinks all the way through it. I have an odd sense of humor... but I\'m glad you enjoyed it ;-)



Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2007.01.09 - 02:47AM Title: Chapter 1

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Viewed for jusdging in the Challange.

Good luck with the competition. Very nice work!


Author's Response: Okay, thanks. I don\'t actually want to win though ;-) But I\'m glad you liked it.



Reviewer: timbers Signed Date: 2007.01.07 - 05:04PM Title: Chapter 1

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That was a wonderful story. I loved the plot and all the characterizations were great! Good luck in the challenge :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you enjoyed it and thank you fore reviewing to let me know. :-)



Reviewer: Frelling Signed Date: 2007.01.06 - 06:52PM Title: Chapter 1

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Well done on creating a beautiful story while keeping with the challenge requirements! I especially love the twins' pranks and the mistletoe lock. Good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was fun to write and I\'m glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review :-)



Reviewer: ginny4everandalways Signed Date: 2006.12.27 - 01:31PM Title: Chapter 1

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Great, story, the flow, plot, everything was perfect. As a judge, I have to say you interpreted the challenge really well and had a great story overall! Keep Writing!

Author's Response: Ah well thanks. I\'m glad you enjoyed it, apart from being a judge. :-) I write all the time, so I promise I won\'t stop.



Reviewer: kmagarden Signed Date: 2006.12.26 - 10:50PM Title: Chapter 1

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Hello! Reading/reviewing as a judge for the challenge.

Really enjoyed your story! Enough so that I will now be looking up your other works, so I hope yo feel good about that!

You held to the requirements of the challenge, and I think it turned out really well. I did spot one typo, they're instead of their (talking about their muggle clothes) but other than that everything looked spot-on. I enjoyed Fred and George's pranks, especially having to kiss under the mistletoe to unlock the door. :-) Cute, they're sneeky that way. I was a bit worried about your characterization of Hermonie, until I realized where you were going with that! She was a bit weepy. :-) But as a mother of 3, I understand hormone challenges! Loved the exchange between Ginny and Molly when the engagement was discovered. Devestated about the Burrow though.

Great job!



Author's Response: It is amazing that with 3 beta\'s and 5 different revisions that I\'d still miss something. Ah well, I don\'t sweat those small mistakes and thankfully I don\'t want to win! LOL Otherwise I might care. Yes, it was fun to mess with Hermione. I certainly do not write her that way in my normal stories and I do take that to be a big compliment that you want to read more of my stuff. I hope you enjoy the other stories as well, and good luck on being a judge. I\'ve done that a few times and it is a lot of work! Although since there are so many great authors entered, I\'m sure it will be very enjoyable. :-)



Reviewer: Spenser Hemmingway Signed Date: 2006.12.26 - 10:51AM Title: Chapter 1

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Ah, Harry hairy? Well a beard may be just the thing for him. I retired from the military in September, and the second thing that I did (after the laxitive in that major's coffee) was to start growing one. It was a bit hard to sleep on at first, but now my wife loves it. I'm sure that Ginny thought Harry's was distinguished-looking as well. As for Ron and that sleeping potion...you can't fool us. We saw him at the SIYE New Years' Eve party last year. Two sips and he was out for the night...and that was only root beer (definitely a lightweight). There were certainly a few surprises, and not just the dramatic ending (poor Ron). Personally I would have liked to see Hagrid's old pet. He could sleep with the twins. Thanks and good luck. Eric B.

Author's Response: *snickers* I always wanted to put a laxative in my XO\'s coffee but never got the chance before I got out. Ah well. Anyway, I don\'t want to win and if I get a chance (not much of that around here with how much I write) I\'ll read yours and laugh my bum off, I\'m sure. Here\'s hoping you win over me! :-D



Reviewer: Tori Signed Date: 2006.12.25 - 11:52PM Title: Chapter 1

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Poor Seventeen-And-Pregnant!Hermione I hope everything works out for her and Ron!

Author's Response: Yeah, not a fun thing to go through... she\'s a smart cookie, though. I think she\'ll muddle through. Hopefully, anyway.. ;-)



Reviewer: Enchantedgurls Signed Date: 2006.12.25 - 10:06AM Title: Chapter 1

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This was so good! I like seeing a story that could actually happen in the 7th book! *Not likely, but hey, dare to dream. Write more! And I hope you win for something.

Author's Response: I know... I kinda wish it would happen but since it won\'t, I have to write about it. Thanks for reviewing! :-)



Reviewer: Dumbledore Anonymous Date: 2006.12.25 - 12:56AM Title: Chapter 1

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That was great! I loved it! Merry Christmas.

Author's Response: Merry Christmas to you too! I\'m glad you enjoyed it :-)

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Reviewer: Victor Aagaard Signed Date: 2006.12.24 - 10:01PM Title: Chapter 1

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I loved it! Good luck in the December Engagement Challenge.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it. ;-)




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