Reviews For 00 Potter
Reviewer: Ronald8472 Signed Date: 2018.03.05 - 10:44PM Title: Early Morning Love
I'm going to ignore chapter 4. The 1st 3 chapters are outstanding. Chapter 4 would be a troll. A few little changes such as keeping the formatting the same i.e. continuing the date location time format... that alone would improve it to acceptable.
Reviewer: snitch_2001 Signed Date: 2016.03.18 - 10:27AM Title: Early Morning Love
Reviewer: Lord Otello Signed Date: 2015.08.30 - 10:19AM Title: Early Morning Love
Hi, great fic, but, ehm, I feel like it must have something more, like, mmm, a dating life, and perhaps a wedding?
Reviewer: madeye232 Signed Date: 2011.05.04 - 01:44AM Title: Early Morning Love
Reviewer: beryl Signed Date: 2011.04.19 - 02:30AM Title: Early Morning Love
Reviewer: hermione19 Signed Date: 2011.04.11 - 08:02PM Title: Early Morning Love
LOVED IT!!!! so cute!!
Reviewer: Stephen Signed Date: 2010.03.11 - 11:20AM Title: Early Morning Love
a cute if abbreviated story. didn't go the way I thought it would at all.
Reviewer: Ginny Rox the Burrow Signed Date: 2008.12.27 - 07:26PM Title: Shot and Shocked
I know they're magical and all but how can Ginny wake up at 6am and leave for work at 5:45? =) Good chapter. Very graphic.*GRtB*
Reviewer: CraZMe Signed Date: 2008.11.19 - 12:11AM Title: Early Morning Love
love the dialogue in this story!!! it's sooooo goood! However I think there was a huge jump in story with the whole harry-liking-ginning thing. Obviously you know it's going to happen but it almost came out of no where ( I'm sry if that didn't make sence) but I still really love your story!
Reviewer: Loyd1989 Signed Date: 2008.11.03 - 01:07PM Title: Early Morning Love
I love this story. I feel that it seems to be moving very fast and almost choppy. The dialogue is superb and there will need to be more details on Harry's secret position. You have done a tremendous job on the military aspect of his detail. Hope you continue and kind of wondering which direction this is taking. Very well done.
Reviewer: Kellygoert Signed Date: 2008.10.27 - 09:43PM Title: Early Morning Love
wow, i can not even explain how happy i am that you've posted on SIYE. I started reading this story on HPFF a looooooooooooong time ago, and there wasn't a post in so long, i thought it was abandoned, which was a total bummer since i loved the story. and now you've posted here! yay! haha, needless to say i greatly enjoy your story. keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Katastrophe Signed Date: 2008.10.27 - 05:44AM Title: Brotherly Love
It's a great concept, but could use a little work in the grammar dept. The difference between too and to, then and than, its and it's, they're and their, so forth; need to be watched a bit more carefully. You might want to get a 2nd beta to take a look at it as well, an extra set of eyes never hurts.
Reviewer: NotACat Signed Date: 2008.10.27 - 03:24AM Title: Shot and Shocked
Where do I start? The abundance of silly parenthetical explanations, the SPaG errors, the egregious naming of children? How could you think Bill's children could be named "Brooklyn and Abby"?
Reviewer: freshwater Signed Date: 2008.10.26 - 02:13PM Title: Early Morning Love
It's too bad that you lost the thread of the spy/special services Potter, but --it you couldn't finish it-- it was at least nice of you to give us some closure. You tell a nice story....with some help on outlining a plot for a multi-chapter fic I'm sure you would do quite well.
Reviewer: DarkLady Anonymous Date: 2008.10.26 - 04:31AM Title: Early Morning Love
Hmmm.... Well not what I was expecting... But hey, I'm a sucker for happy endings... I'm a little disappointed that you didn't want to continue the story, I think it could have evolved into something really good... But that being said, I know how you feel... And I've been in that position before...
Reviewer: charon Signed Date: 2008.01.13 - 12:39AM Title: Shot and Shocked
Oooh, Iím a sucker for Ďmilitarizedí Harry stories! Iím a military man myself, so they strike a chord with me.
Reviewer: harry__ginny___4ever Signed Date: 2008.01.05 - 01:35PM Title: Brotherly Love
Reviewer: KaKe3535 Signed Date: 2007.10.07 - 03:43AM Title: Brotherly Love
aww.. they are soo cute.. i hope they get together soon
Reviewer: HarryGinnyMustLiveOn Signed Date: 2007.09.28 - 12:51AM Title: Brotherly Love
This was great! I love this original idea. There is a few mistakes in there that I noticed, but nothing a quick read over by a friend or beta reader wouldn't fix :) I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: clypeterson Signed Date: 2007.09.01 - 12:27AM Title: Shot and Shocked
the story in nice , but is harry a wizerd or a soldier . i think more spells, less guns .