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Reviewer: Strider Signed Date: 2007.05.29 - 03:57PM Title: SAS

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You might want to make one more proofreading pass over your chapters, you still have some errors in there. It's interesting to read about Harry having to do his work without magic. --Strider

Author's Response: thanks ill look through them a few more times thanks for the review



Reviewer: aprilmoon92 Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 11:21PM Title: SAS

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Personally, I don't really hold with the very muggle-ised harry- it just doesn't seem realistic. Also, there really is a limit to harry's saving people thing... you said he killed Voldie when he was 17 but thought he still needed to do mroe? dude, that's probably the second largest accomplishment since dumbledore killed grindelwald.

anyway, yeah i just wanted to give you my opinion, although i do understand your fascination with armaments and stuff. just take this as positive feedback, okay?

but overall, the story is pretty well-written. ~aprilmoon

Author's Response: thanks at least you are being honest. the story wont be completely like that thanks for the review



Reviewer: Scorcher Signed Date: 2007.05.25 - 03:50AM Title: SAS

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SAS is the Special Air Service regimen.. not support..

Author's Response: thanks for pointing that out to me. in the future chapters ill make sure to change that. for some reason i always call it support. oh well. thanks again



Reviewer: nuage blanc Signed Date: 2007.05.23 - 06:57PM Title: SAS

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Great beginning! Well written! Continue and update soon please, I can't wait to see more of Harry and Ginny's relationship and/or friendship.

Author's Response: thanks



Reviewer: knightsbridge Signed Date: 2007.05.23 - 04:03PM Title: SAS

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Oh way too short...lol, I know It's your story...it's just that as I get itnot a chapter, it's over.

Author's Response: sorry lol ill try to make the chapter longer thanks for the review



Reviewer: HarrynGinnyfan Signed Date: 2007.05.23 - 03:02PM Title: SAS

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Cute but short. Looking forward to more! :)

Author's Response: thanks



Reviewer: eaglebird Signed Date: 2007.05.23 - 01:43PM Title: SAS

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I just love Harry and Ginny scenes. In this story, is it a continuation of HBP where they once upon a time had a very loving relationship and just haven't got back together yet?

Author's Response: ill state that in the next chapter thanks for the review




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